You're Not Serious

tynamite

The flaws I have the song is

1. It’s not melodic enough
2. It’s anti-climatic, it doesn’t really go anywhere
3. It’s too minimal and I don’t make minimal music. I prefer the crowded arrangement for my style.
4. It’s not filthy enough or light and airy enough, the bass needs to feel more dirty so I need to add something else in. Or even better, remove the bass and add some glass pads and an icy air blast pad.
5. I need a filthy drop as if it’s some dance song, for good measure xD … no well a 10% drop
6. The mini-crescendo at the end of the song, needs to be expanded into a new song which will have a real crescendo

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