This is a rap song, I was looking for serious feedback.

I wrote this for my girlfriend, but she'll never hear it because Travis Twitt is the earth moon and sun. It's not really that good anyway :)

I love people with extra large egos!

It was, and it was so bloody hot when i was recording this that i nearly melted!

Umm?

Its nice to hang up the car keys and put one foot in front of the other because lets face it all routes lead to the pub ha ha!

Does anybody want to go, where it's cold with me, And we'll ice away our bodies in the snow. Does anybody want to go, home with me, And we'll hide away our feelings on our thrones Cause the first you want, is the thing you didn't need, And the…

Does anybody want to go, where it's cold with me, And we'll ice away our bodies in the snow. Does anybody want to go, home with me, And we'll hide away our feelings on our thrones Cause the first you want, is the thing you didn't need, And the…

Does anybody want to go, where it's cold with me, And we'll ice away our bodies in the snow. Does anybody want to go, home with me, And we'll hide away our feelings on our thrones Cause the first you want, is the thing you didn't need, And the…

(Em) A legend that the sailors told Tales shared from long ago (C) Secrets that are captured in the (Em) air (Em) It comes to you from far way Whispered roars that fade away (C) Answers that are carried on the (Em) breeze Only (C) heard…