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You Are Renewed

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An epic song about bathroom remodeling. Written and recorded by request.

So many things are going wrong
It’s been getting worse far too long

I cannot bear to look at you
You cannot do the things you used to do

I look for ways to make a change
I look for ways to rearrange
The things inside of you

Professionals have given thought
Of ways that everything can be wrought

Too many choices to be made
Too many things to give in a trade

You are completely pulled apart
Torn down to the very heart
Everything removed

I see connections that are leading into you
Everything is supported absolutely true

You were created of the whitest porcelain
Now reconstruction can finally begin

You are finally renewed
Now I can enter you in the nude

I fall in love with you again
You have always been my only friend

I’ll come and visit frequently
With open eyes so I can see
Everything renewed

renewed,
Everything within you is renewed

renewed,
Everything within you is renewed

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Ricia Rae said

That is a fun song that can be read in many different ways :). Nicely done!!! I feel a the bath calling me after listening to this. Oh, nice guitar solo here too.

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