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Its my 1st ever song composed and I know its not the best but still :) Please if you could leave ways I could improve it would be helpfull, thanks!

Its my 1st ever song composed and I know its not the best but still :) Please if you could leave ways I could improve it would be helpfull, thanks!

Updated, new title, didn't seem to fit "the blood mile"

Its done nothing but rain this spring,and its still bloody raining!

Its done nothing but rain this spring,and its still bloody raining!

Its done nothing but rain this spring,and its still bloody raining!

She hangs a little garden so everyone can fit in her yard when it's time to take tea fills it up when they're walking about they really knew how to twist and shout and they're always going back that way again rents a flat with his sister…

She hangs a little garden so everyone can fit in her yard when it's time to take tea fills it up when they're walking about they really knew how to twist and shout and they're always going back that way again rents a flat with his sister…

Lyrics : oh blood mile on the horizon philadelphia newsmen keep on writing and if the shit ever hits the fan the musicians play in the band because for a mile of blood you can get yourself on this mountain of mud but if you got blood on your…