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Once, upon saying goodbye

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comes to the senses
a sweetness so sweet
and deep
that the tongue curls
and presses
hard inside the
mouth

holding, for a moment, and for another
the throat catches
closes
so the sweetness cannot pass

Once?
Say it again,
say it once more

I promise

the pattern repeats

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Mannequin Races said

Thanks for your comment on my voice! Made my evening actually. :) I'm pretty shy about it actually... Anyway killer guitar playing. I've never been much of a guy who noodles around on the fret board or does much lead work so I really like tracks like this! Cool tune. This is a helluva lot longer than anything I will ever write! My hat is off to you.

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