Andrew:
I am working on the lyrics and tightening up a few things. I am saving vocals for last for all of these tracks. Obviously, this one could use a bunch of lyrics. I was going for a very loose, spacey jam... I wanted it to feel like the drummer was trying to find it. I appreciate your notes and the Electric Ladyland reference is very kind! I look forward to figuring out the lyrics to this one.
I appreciate your kind words tremendously, this is a special one. There should be a space between "Signs" and this and I appreciate you spotting that for me. I will add some space at the end of signs... what is another :23 on a 13-minute song?
Andrew,
Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate you listening and I will return the favor with yours. Should I give "FAWM 2022 Song-writing Demos" a spin?
Bring in original instrumental tracks from AV session
Keep bass where it is
Mix accompaniment up in beginning
Mix accompaniment throughout up to meet the piano
Comments on Brian J. Kenny's stuff
You always kind of giggle when you dance
I don’t know where we are going But we’re making good time
Snoozer
Hustler’s Histoe
You knew me when You know me now And I can change You know me know And there’s still a lot of work to do
thank you for your kind words: they are music to our ears!
Thanks for the kind words, eternals
Nothing recorded live
Nothing recorded live
Everything except vocals and lead guitars recorded live
Drums, Bass, cool Jazz Combo all recorded live
real nice mix. the panned guitars are fantastic in the head set.
forget about genre. this is original. nice job.
I like it. feels classic. it's a foot tapper indeed.
jammin"
I’m digging this song
Thank you both for your kind words! e are working on these songs and getting them ready.....
Andrew: I am working on the lyrics and tightening up a few things. I am saving vocals for last for all of these tracks. Obviously, this one could use a bunch of lyrics. I was going for a very loose, spacey jam... I wanted it to feel like the drummer was trying to find it. I appreciate your notes and the Electric Ladyland reference is very kind! I look forward to figuring out the lyrics to this one.
I appreciate your kind words tremendously, this is a special one. There should be a space between "Signs" and this and I appreciate you spotting that for me. I will add some space at the end of signs... what is another :23 on a 13-minute song?
Andrew, Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate you listening and I will return the favor with yours. Should I give "FAWM 2022 Song-writing Demos" a spin?
Comments made by Brian J. Kenny
Bring the bright up in instrumental track
Re record the vocal fix with vox 1 setting on mic
Look at piano on the middle of the song
Coz up
Mix bass and gtr down Let the piano breathe a little
Add iso vox treatment
Bring in original instrumental tracks from AV session Keep bass where it is Mix accompaniment up in beginning Mix accompaniment throughout up to meet the piano
Bring in original instrumental tracks from AV session
Vox up
Mix punch vocals better
Vox up
Fix piano chord at cox fix
Try to add air to the vox fix
Vox fic down
We moved back to the Bay Area in 2005 and conversations with Chris Bianco led to this song. He gets a co-writing credit
Turn drums down a tad
Turn drums down a bit Add second gtr harmony could just be octave Turn elec gtr down a tad
Vox fix flubs “You look vaguely like I remember…”
Fix last verse
Add Vocal Verse "Cops caught me downtown, and I'm locked in a cell and the scene down here's like the last level of hell..."