Andrew Russe (86.155.32.98) said Thursday Short but very sweet... These short ones encourage me to add all sorts of extra meaning myself as I'm listening. That's kinda what happens when we listen to songs anyway - no matter how much the lyrics are designed to lead us to certain conclusions or "points of view"... a song never really says what the songwriter thinks it says ... but these short ones encourage this "listener completes the song" process even more, they let my mind run free ... love it.

Guest (47.189.109.204) said Thursday I love that you don't hold back and anything goes. I never know what's going to jump out of that brain of yours! Love the arrangement, the harmonies and nature! Fun and short. I think I could have gone a little longer, but I'll just play it, awgain or put it on a loop if it will let me!! Write on!!! Thanks for the share!!

Greg Connor (208.187.116.207) said Thursday Short and sweet! An impression of a thought to be completed by the listener, maybe.

Colleen Dillon (75.73.189.201) said Thursday Ahhhhhh! The great outdoors....

kavin. (174.197.77.120) said 2 hours ago You’re a master at layering those vocals man

kavin. (174.197.77.120) said 2 hours ago You’re a master at layering those vocals man

Colleen Dillon (75.73.189.201) said Thursday Ahhhhhh! The great outdoors....

Greg Connor (208.187.116.207) said Thursday Short and sweet! An impression of a thought to be completed by the listener, maybe.

Guest (47.189.109.204) said Thursday I love that you don't hold back and anything goes. I never know what's going to jump out of that brain of yours! Love the arrangement, the harmonies and nature! Fun and short. I think I could have gone a little longer, but I'll just play it, awgain or put it on a loop if it will let me!! Write on!!! Thanks for the share!!

Andrew Russe (86.155.32.98) said Thursday Short but very sweet... These short ones encourage me to add all sorts of extra meaning myself as I'm listening. That's kinda what happens when we listen to songs anyway - no matter how much the lyrics are designed to lead us to certain conclusions or "points of view"... a song never really says what the songwriter thinks it says ... but these short ones encourage this "listener completes the song" process even more, they let my mind run free ... love it.

You’re a master at layering those vocals man

"Good song! Upbeat spin on a lingering hurtful end of a marriage." Rosemarie Kempton

"I enjoyed the okay song, kept waiting for the poignant moment and it was there at the end." Lee Snaples

Excellent song... I know the feeling.

ahhhhh families!!!!!!!!!!! I love this song!!!!!

Ahhhhhh! The great outdoors....

Short and sweet! An impression of a thought to be completed by the listener, maybe.

I love that you don't hold back and anything goes. I never know what's going to jump out of that brain of yours! Love the arrangement, the harmonies and nature! Fun and short. I think I could have gone a little longer, but I'll just play it, again or put it on a loop if it will let me!! Write on!!! Thanks for the share!!

:) I wondered if that was the case - but then the "oh here's some words, whatever, at least they rhyme" often speak the loudest to the listeners! ... It's just gone 8am here. Just seen Mrs R off (her boss collects her - she's a nanny), I've been working since 6.15am... doesn't look like the sun is actually coming out today here!

Short but very sweet... These short ones encourage me to add all sorts of extra meaning myself as I'm listening. That's kinda what happens when we listen to songs anyway - no matter how much the lyrics are designed to lead us to certain conclusions or "points of view"... a song never really says what the songwriter thinks it says ... but these short ones encourage this "listener completes the song" process even more, they let my mind run free ... love it.

This really creates a world of it's own...

I like how you fit your voice and sentiment into this barren acoustic landscape.

Love the tender lyric buried in the storm of sound.

It's like the instruments are playing footsie.

Iy's like a meditation...could loop indefinitely

...another sunny song. Great happy groove!

What a sunny song!

Love the rawness of the tracks and the mix. Just wish the vocal was out a bit more.

I love the chord move you do at the end of line three in the verse. The lyric grabs me from, That she hopes will be the very one That you decide to wear." Because of you voice you use and the sounds it says the object of their desire/affections is David Bowie.My favorite line, among many is, And Blazey’s left her homework on the train." And, It’s never crossed their minds that you might fail."

"I’m trying to put you behind me" Ha ha!

Great vocal.

Do we ever get past this?

Guitar sounds great!

Really gets the raw sadness. But by the time they tell you it's over it's most likely been over for some time...

My friend, George Sluizer was making a film with River Phoenix and asked me to submit some music to possibly be used in the movie. He didn't end up sing this but he did use four other of my submissions.

Beautifully done.

WiW! I have had it for many years but it never left my desk side. It's been the guitar I reach for when I am working at my bedroom/office computer. Never even thought about recording with it.

So clean and clear. Love it.

Amazing tone. I'd love to hear this on True's system at TPBY Speakers.

Great groove. Perky & quirky.