The anon verse is gorgeous - and you matched it. Lovely stuff.

Really dig this mate

Wow! Glorious writing....

Another classic! Awesome lyrics. Love this!!

Cool song, and concept, I may take a shot at it.

I know you had fun doing this one. Real creative.

Reminds me of a few early John and Paul collaborations -- a bit of psychedelic seasoning, an intriguing flow, a bridge that's like a whole other song. Brilliant! Great job!

In the future, they should teach this to elementary students they way they teach Stephen Foster songs in school today. It's brand new but I'm already wanting to label it a classic!

cool stuff! You always have the best lyrics!!!

Interesting bridge. I didn't expect that. You know how to keep the listener's attention.

The music expresses your pain better than any words alone could. I feel your hurt now. Damn, man -- ouch!

I just read the lyrics, and I'm commenting before I hear the music to say, wow, you really have a gift with words.

Like it

I like this...sounds like 'america'. very mellow, chilling guitars. top class voice.

Wow!!! This song really just hit me. So poignant. It makes my heart just ache. Amazing song. Thanks !!!

Very unique! Nice harmonies and unusual presentationv. Thanks for your comment on my song. Paul

Buddy Holly meets Bobby Fuller 4 meets Doug Sham ...Really like this one

Fantastic guitar ...ry cooder got nothing on you my friend...imagine me getting choked up over a couch? yr there

Aww love it to bits. The lyrics and their delivery are superb. I'm liking the wandering between major and minor in the chords.

Great mix love it

This really creates a world of it's own...

I like how you fit your voice and sentiment into this barren acoustic landscape.

Love the tender lyric buried in the storm of sound.

It's like the instruments are playing footsie.

Iy's like a meditation...could loop indefinitely

...another sunny song. Great happy groove!

What a sunny song!

Love the rawness of the tracks and the mix. Just wish the vocal was out a bit more.

I love the chord move you do at the end of line three in the verse. The lyric grabs me from, That she hopes will be the very one That you decide to wear." Because of you voice you use and the sounds it says the object of their desire/affections is David Bowie.My favorite line, among many is, And Blazey’s left her homework on the train." And, It’s never crossed their minds that you might fail."

"I’m trying to put you behind me" Ha ha!

Great vocal.

Do we ever get past this?

Guitar sounds great!

Really gets the raw sadness. But by the time they tell you it's over it's most likely been over for some time...

My friend, George Sluizer was making a film with River Phoenix and asked me to submit some music to possibly be used in the movie. He didn't end up sing this but he did use four other of my submissions.

Beautifully done.

WiW! I have had it for many years but it never left my desk side. It's been the guitar I reach for when I am working at my bedroom/office computer. Never even thought about recording with it.

So clean and clear. Love it.

Amazing tone. I'd love to hear this on True's system at TPBY Speakers.

Great groove. Perky & quirky.