I am very sorry to hear about Brook.

Maybe he needed a better PR firm? Perhaps he should have considered late night info-mercials? Excellent concept!

Very Pretty story telling. I've been to Deadwood. What a place to spend eternity.

Excellent!

Another very clever one!

This one is one of my favourites of your tracks. The chorus is especially poignant.

I love this! The music is really driving!

You performed this so well. A very interesting story, perfectly done. Good luck, "Emily". Yeah, nice chord!

I love the way you have made this true story into a song. Straight to the point lyrics with tremendous backing vocals. It's a very strong and determined sounding track.

Oh JM, it is very loud! Come on, don't be like that, you can think of something.

Wow, JM! Grrreat harmonies, and a master class in lyrics.

nice job... its a snapshot in a snapshot.

So in 1951 you lived in the desert just around the corner from where I grew up , except I wasn't there until 1953 at the ripe and smelly age of 1.I think I was considering buying a house out in the same patch of desert you grew up in. Your Dad might of known a Bob Dollins, he worked at Northrop for a short while . What year did you depart?

These songs with the choir are cool. Are these friends , sounds like you got a regular choir doing back up

Small world indeed. In 1953 I was 1 and we lived on the base. In old pics the housing were those Quansot Huts. Hell, if you lived out there at 8 years no wonder you got that dreamy like recollection. It be like living on the Moon, had barren can it get, and the bright sun beating down cooking that desert, sonic booms rattleing windows. I know, I don't know when they stop doing it but I remember as far back as 1964 of our classrooms windows rattling and that 's in Palmdale. They test artilliary as well out at EAB. Fortunately I was only 1 year old back then and i was shielded from the sun by my moma's breast and taken out there before I could develope a memory.Funny thing in early '54 my folks moved just off the south end of 15th. I still live close to it. There is no hope for Peace on Earth as long as militaries stand armed and ready.

You captured the mood! Good integration of song voice and guitar. It was warm & tender despite the hard cold reality the song spoke of. Imaginitive lyrics that mixed well with the sweet simplicity of the music.

Another Palmdale resident. The horny toads you don't see to much anymore but he tumbleweeds and the wind are still here so kite flying is still around. Hey ,you forgot the rattlesnakes. I don't remember it being so dreamy though. Your song is different and somewhat interesting but I wouldn't vote for it to be the official Palmdale song. I arrived in Palmdale in 1953, maybe that's what it is.

Nice percussion. Strong message!

Most excellent lyrics! I admire those who will stand up and be counted! Great song!

LOL as they say

This really creates a world of it's own...

I like how you fit your voice and sentiment into this barren acoustic landscape.

Love the tender lyric buried in the storm of sound.

It's like the instruments are playing footsie.

Iy's like a meditation...could loop indefinitely

...another sunny song. Great happy groove!

What a sunny song!

Love the rawness of the tracks and the mix. Just wish the vocal was out a bit more.

I love the chord move you do at the end of line three in the verse. The lyric grabs me from, That she hopes will be the very one That you decide to wear." Because of you voice you use and the sounds it says the object of their desire/affections is David Bowie.My favorite line, among many is, And Blazey’s left her homework on the train." And, It’s never crossed their minds that you might fail."

"I’m trying to put you behind me" Ha ha!

Great vocal.

Do we ever get past this?

Guitar sounds great!

Really gets the raw sadness. But by the time they tell you it's over it's most likely been over for some time...

My friend, George Sluizer was making a film with River Phoenix and asked me to submit some music to possibly be used in the movie. He didn't end up sing this but he did use four other of my submissions.

Beautifully done.

WiW! I have had it for many years but it never left my desk side. It's been the guitar I reach for when I am working at my bedroom/office computer. Never even thought about recording with it.

So clean and clear. Love it.

Amazing tone. I'd love to hear this on True's system at TPBY Speakers.

Great groove. Perky & quirky.