Treadin Water (45 Min Songwriting Challenge)
Tharek Ali Mokbul
Sorry About The Quality of the recording on this one…
A Friend of Mine (64Guitars From Songcrafters. Org ) challenged me to write a song about a subject (a Secret….Lol)….
This was finished 45 mins Later…
Will be Good for me on Open Mic Nights…
Simple Lyrics I Can remember…
Hope You Like it…
Peace
T (OsCKilO)
“Treading Water”
Words and music by Tharek Mokbul
Bring on our blue sunrise
Bring on our blue sunrise
Red is danger. Black is rest
On this day you must confess
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
Bring on our blue sunrise
Bring on our blue sunrise
Red is danger. Black is death
On this day you must confess
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
Bring on our blue sunrise
Bring on our blue sunrise
You know the next day is dawnin’
You know the next fight is callin’
Bring on our blue sunrise today
Bring on our blue sunrise today
Red is danger. Black is rest
On this day you must confess
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
Bring on our blue sunrise
Bring on our blue sunrise today
Red is danger. Black is rest
On this day you must confess
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
I’m treadin’ water on your lies
Bring on our blue sunrise today
45 mins? Wow...I'd be delighted to produce this in 45 days!
The lyrics and guitar blend well together. Definitely not bad for 45 minutes!
Sweet song man. The acoustics sounds really good and the vocals are full and resonate throughout. And to top it off its exceptionally beautiful. Nice work man!
Very cool tune Osckilo!!!