Does anybody want to go, where it's cold with me, And we'll ice away our bodies in the snow. Does anybody want to go, home with me, And we'll hide away our feelings on our thrones Cause the first you want, is the thing you didn't need, And the…

I wrote this for my girlfriend, but she'll never hear it because Travis Twitt is the earth moon and sun. It's not really that good anyway :)

This is a rap song, I was looking for serious feedback.

Do you ever feel, like sometimes you can't wake up, Your dream of broken locks, And you're one of them. Do you ever feel, like some times you can't move on, There comes a breaking dawn, And you've turned your back, again. Do you ever feel, like…

this is not finish want more feedback before i give 100% to finish it

"the afternoon kiss"

Pink Floyd

Something beautiful for the end of the album . . . THANKS, CHRIS!

BETTER.

might try a video upload for this piece because now I am upload ing with my phone...