I don’t hate it outright… but I don’t really like it either. The chorus is okay, the groove is okay… maybe I just need to re-record it and play better. Maybe just tone down the grunge a little. I don’t know. It’s not a complete loss, but I’m displeased. Also, it is the first song started and finished in September, so it’s got that going for it.
Guitars are all a Gibson ES-335 into a Klon KTR into a Malaise Forever Black Lives Matter into a Vox AC15 and a Fender Bassbreaker 15. The leads swapped a Wren and Cuff Tri Pi 70 for the BLM and reversed the order with the Klon. Makes sense?
accidents happen don’t you know
its just the way that things go
I’ll try to make things right again
I only don’t know just when
verse 1 + 3
take a look at me
that could never be
shocking as you please