My two cents: Melodyne and pitch-correction are perfect for certain styles of song. This is one of them. While pitch imperfections are acceptable and even welcome in certain types of music, the crispness of electronic music often demands perfectly on-pitch vocals. As opposed to auto-tune applications, melodyne doesn't monkey with with voice qualities, so this still sounds like SINGING rather than robotic T-Pain. Good stuff... I feel like this track could use a beat about halfway through. I want Melodyne!

I am truly hopeless perhaps, but I can't tell the difference. I think your pitch is cracking.