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V1 Weeds are growing higher The buildings unkempt The windows are al broken The signals are bent V2 Its shadow of its heyday Slowly dying alone It has many stories to tell And most are now unknown C Once oh yes once It all happened…
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What a nice, laid back sound and a pretty melody. The subtle little slide/dobro touches were just perfect. That uke sounded like a mandolin (or maybe it was) and provided a really solid rhythm. Loved the whole vibe. Applause.

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Verse I left out a few years ago Chasing dreams big cities own Concrete and asphalt take big steps And lately I don’t know why I left Chorus They paved that gravel road that’ll take me home But it’s been too long not to give it a…
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Meet Me In Morocco V1 Meet me in Morocco when the light shines on the water And the chatter of the morning market starts As the call to prayer get louder And the heat starts to rise And the bus to Casablanca’s soon departs V2 The smell…
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i like the violins when they happen

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One step in front of another Water Bottles in my hand Off to see the beauty Thats all across this land Ive wondered over mountain tops Ive seen hidden springs Ive been to places no one’s seen Natures amazing things A trek a hike a…
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Well done! I really enjoyed the listen!

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Delicious You were remarkable when I first saw you. And now the flashbacks start And that is why I'm standing here today What are you doing now my dear I wish you were near So many emotions come in to play I dream of you in that summer…
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Love the picking structure of this song, beautiful images. I hear it with violins.

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skirmish pet food fawm woke up jumped on computer at 6 wrote some lyrics - saw it was 6.08 i think thats a record even for me! He was once a hero revered by all around But soon was all forgotten Well Thats what he found His money…
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So sad and poignant. An interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done.

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song in the fearless challenge - Stars crashing I Researched what actually happens when stars collide - then put it in to a relationship break scenario. Used the steel pedal again after interviewing Dan Tanz he reminded me how good they are!
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That was great.

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song in the fearless challenge - Stars crashing I Researched what actually happens when stars collide - then put it in to a relationship break scenario. Used the steel pedal again after interviewing Dan Tanz he reminded me how good they are!
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Terrific John. Very good, your voice was so comparable to the music. Especially loved the slide. Well done

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