**Song-writing Demo for FAWM 2022**
Song number 1
Written Sunday 6th February 2022
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OK, this is a bit of a departure for me - posting songwriting demos.
This is a one mic recording made this morning in the living room, touch of reverbs…
This is kick-ass! You have a great voice and I love your guitar playing. When you have great ingredients like that, you don’t need much more than good material, of which there is plenty here! I am very inspired listening to this. I appreciate you sharing it and I look forward to delving deeper -bjk
Andrew:
I am working on the lyrics and tightening up a few things. I am saving vocals for last for all of these tracks. Obviously, this one could use a bunch of lyrics. I was going for a very loose, spacey jam... I wanted it to feel like the drummer was trying to find it. I appreciate your notes and the Electric Ladyland reference is very kind! I look forward to figuring out the lyrics to this one.
I appreciate your kind words tremendously, this is a special one. There should be a space between "Signs" and this and I appreciate you spotting that for me. I will add some space at the end of signs... what is another :23 on a 13-minute song?
Comments on Brian J. Kenny's stuff
Vox fix flubs “You look vaguely like I remember…”
Fix last verse
Add Vocal Verse "Cops caught me downtown, and I'm locked in a cell and the scene down here's like the last level of hell..."
Bass down vox up
GTR up at beginning
GTR up
Check bass
Vinyl on bass
Bass down
Vox up
De esser
Bass down
Take bass low end
Vox up
Tame bass and piano
Bass down
ACC gtr down bass same bass ru. Down
ACC gtr down
Desser on vox
Bass run down
Comments made by Brian J. Kenny
Catullus n Epode #13
Rose gather ye rosebuds, while ye may
It was the least shocking surprise
Ran out of lemonade outside of ceres
What kind of music do you think I’ll make when I’m 83
Love keeps us young
Giggling keeps us young
You always kind of giggle when you dance
I don’t know where we are going But we’re making good time
Snoozer
Hustler’s Histoe
You knew me when You know me now And I can change You know me know And there’s still a lot of work to do
Thanks for the kind words, eternals
Nothing recorded live
Drums, Bass, cool Jazz Combo all recorded live
I’m digging this song
Thank you both for your kind words! e are working on these songs and getting them ready.....
This is kick-ass! You have a great voice and I love your guitar playing. When you have great ingredients like that, you don’t need much more than good material, of which there is plenty here! I am very inspired listening to this. I appreciate you sharing it and I look forward to delving deeper -bjk
Andrew: I am working on the lyrics and tightening up a few things. I am saving vocals for last for all of these tracks. Obviously, this one could use a bunch of lyrics. I was going for a very loose, spacey jam... I wanted it to feel like the drummer was trying to find it. I appreciate your notes and the Electric Ladyland reference is very kind! I look forward to figuring out the lyrics to this one.
I appreciate your kind words tremendously, this is a special one. There should be a space between "Signs" and this and I appreciate you spotting that for me. I will add some space at the end of signs... what is another :23 on a 13-minute song?