Inspired by a large stone I saw in the Ortspark in Munich, which somebody had carefully engraved with the name Mabel.
No loops used this time, all virtual instruments played by me. Cymbal, guitar, acoustic guitar, violin.
A thoughtfully constructed and genuinely performed song, Steve. I particularly appreciate that way the violin and acoustic guitar interweave throughout. Nice job!
Thanks Tom. Yes, the track is shorter than I expected. I wanted the guitars speeded up, and in doing so it shortened the whole track considerably. Perhaps I will extend it. Cheers for listening : )
Love the funky bass in this one, Steve! My only "complaint" (if you want to call it that) is that I wish it were a little longer. That said, what you've made here sticks in the listener's mind far longer than its 1 and half minute run time might suggest, so I can see how one could argue the length is perfect.
Synths are meant to represent the fast beating heart of the technological city, with its busy trains and industrious people. The breathing is life, and the cheerful keyboard is supposed to be the fun and excitement of life in a city with a flourishing…
Thanks for listening and commenting on my track In 2. I'm returning the favor and the support. Well produced and interesting techno to my ears. Keep the muse going!
Cyborgs conquer the planet, crushing resistance and enslaving the human race. The cello represents the people who ignore the destruction and carry on as normal, like the orchestra playing on the deck of the Titanic as it went down.
Lyrics by Tom Browning
Slight, crooked teeth,
I hear behind the screens so blind
Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Down, in the suit that we wear,
It's in the suit that we share.
Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find
That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide
Through, the dirt,
Spring pinches it's deadly grip
An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it
Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen.
Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Damn! Feels good to hit the Upload button again!
Completed RPM 17. this is the last track!!. the album is my first run through with logic pro ( dumping pro tools and the monthly subscription fee)
I feel great playing again.. been so long…
Greg Connor, Scott Zosel and I wrote this one today around my coffee table. It's been awhile since we've had a chance to do that, and it felt like "going home" a bit to us...
We wrote this in support of all those who are trying to find the…
Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!
Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!
He can't play nicely or share his toys
He always takes from the other boys
Got no time for music or vids
Doesn't act like the other kids
Does Donald
Don't let Donald play
He's gonna spoil your day
Believe his words if you must
But only…
Em
Well, some folks got big noses
Some folks got big ass
Some folks stand out in the aisle
Make it hard to pass
Am
Some folks got money
Em
They say, “That’s just how it goes.”
B7 A
They make it hard for folks like me
Am Em
To keep…
This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!
He can't play nicely or share his toys
He always takes from the other boys
Got no time for music or vids
Doesn't act like the other kids
Does Donald
Don't let Donald play
He's gonna spoil your day
Believe his words if you must
But only…
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.
Lyrics: Mike Graszyk
Vocals, Vocal Melody: Jessica Rasche
Guitars: Derek Barlas
Bass: George Schiessl
Drums: Ole Kirkeby
Original Music & Production: Steffen Offermann
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Thanks a lot Tom. Glad you enjoyed!
Glad to hear it guest. You came to the right doktor.
nice! calmed down when i heard this-i had been in a bad mood.
Dude! I love everything about this. Amazing stuff, Steve!
A thoughtfully constructed and genuinely performed song, Steve. I particularly appreciate that way the violin and acoustic guitar interweave throughout. Nice job!
Thanks Tom. Yes, the track is shorter than I expected. I wanted the guitars speeded up, and in doing so it shortened the whole track considerably. Perhaps I will extend it. Cheers for listening : )
Love the funky bass in this one, Steve! My only "complaint" (if you want to call it that) is that I wish it were a little longer. That said, what you've made here sticks in the listener's mind far longer than its 1 and half minute run time might suggest, so I can see how one could argue the length is perfect.
Thanks for that Proods!
Fun! A toe tappin' collage of sound!
Thanks for listening Tom. Glad you like it. : )
Aptly titled--I definitely was stomping along to the rhythm of this song. You mix a nice contrast of styles here. Well done, Steve!
Thanks for listening guest : )
Smooth
Thanks for your support and encouragement Tom : )
A really cool contrast between crunchy verses and catchy choruses, Steve! Big thumbs up!
another nice one.i will be rocking this one while im at work.
Thanks for listening and commenting on my track In 2. I'm returning the favor and the support. Well produced and interesting techno to my ears. Keep the muse going!
Winner!
Thanks buddy, glad you enjoyed it
Cheers Jason!
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Like train sound, clever intro. Hypnotic sound, quick! Pass me the pipe : )
Love it! Blues/ fleetwood mac sound.
Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Great guitar tones. Reminds me a bit of Wishbone Ash. Cool!
Moody and deep, enjoy the guitar tone and your expressive vocals Tom.
Excellent Steffen! Emotional without sounding miserable, as James said.
Lovely! Really well expressed and performed. Good job Colleen and the guys
Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.
Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!
Lovely vocals. Great expression in your voice, this number suits you well, good work Tom!
Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!
Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!
Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)
Thank you fairynuff!
James, love this! Neil Young sound to it, and great, funny lyrics.
Cool. Like the guitar start. Reminiscent of Bolan to me, rocked up and psychedelic. Very nice Brett, been waiting for more music from you!
This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.
Multi layered this time Tom.like the extra guitar coming in. It sounds great. Not easy song to carry off but you have done a very good job. Super!
Atmospheric, great tune, nice singing, well mixed, I really like it. Well done Steffen!