A trance inducing tune -- engaging stuff! Nice work here, Steve!

A menacing vibe to parts of this one and yet there is some rays of hope that shine through every once in awhile. Quite epic. Makes me think of some of the current events that have been going on in my country recently. Excellent work here, Steve!

Thanks Tom. When you finish moving home, or when you finish moving to the beat?

Haha! I would join you, but I'd only fall on my ass!

Thank you my friend : )

I hate wasps but I love this song. It's a great idea, and very pleasant to listen to. Kind regards from Germany

I want to go back to the early 80's and roller-skate to this one!!!

Fun stuff, Steve! I love the speaker rattling bass and the crisp drum sound you got going on here. I'm tempted to craft some lyrics and melodies to this one, once I finish moving.

Thanks Radio Roswell. I hope there's a movie producer out there who agrees! : )

Thanks Jason, appreciate it!

oh yeah...this could be in a movie soundtrack.

dig that guitar part!

I don't know about that, but cheers for the vote!

Thanks Proods. Happy that you like it

Clever...

Another masterpiece!

Thanks guest

Cheers Jason

Nice music Free Tools

excellent track, perfect title!

Like train sound, clever intro. Hypnotic sound, quick! Pass me the pipe : )

Love it! Blues/ fleetwood mac sound.

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Great guitar tones. Reminds me a bit of Wishbone Ash. Cool!

Moody and deep, enjoy the guitar tone and your expressive vocals Tom.

Excellent Steffen! Emotional without sounding miserable, as James said.

Lovely! Really well expressed and performed. Good job Colleen and the guys

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

Lovely vocals. Great expression in your voice, this number suits you well, good work Tom!

Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!

Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Thank you fairynuff!

James, love this! Neil Young sound to it, and great, funny lyrics.

Cool. Like the guitar start. Reminiscent of Bolan to me, rocked up and psychedelic. Very nice Brett, been waiting for more music from you!

This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Multi layered this time Tom.like the extra guitar coming in. It sounds great. Not easy song to carry off but you have done a very good job. Super!

Atmospheric, great tune, nice singing, well mixed, I really like it. Well done Steffen!