Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

Thanks Brett

very cool.

Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

Thanks fairynuff : )

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

nice..

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

I hear you, brother.

Thank you fairynuff!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Strange and unearthly, but compelling. Very good.

Grooves along nicely. Like the variety of sounds you use

Nice, riffy, like the concept. Good work buddy!

Funny, well constructed, and you have a lovely voice. Great!

Like the idea, catchy too!

Nice voice, I like your melody too : )

Cool and weird. I like it!

Cool. Have you ever tried to sing along? I'm bad at singing, shy and embarrassed, but with a few of the effects available I have given it a go. Rock on Johnny!

Like your de-heavied take on this one Johnny. Different.

Kind of pure and clear, like your other songs. Nice version

Nice, Tom. Simple and effective

Like the crackling record start. Nice guitar sound, reminds me a little of LedZep Bron y aur. Good work

Powerful. Like the rhythm

Nice sounds. Effective and yet minimalist

Love the mix of sounds. Great vocals. Very distinctive and original sound you have Brett.

Beautiful song Craig

Nice. Atmospheric.

Nice version. Rock on!

Nice rhythm and arrangement. Great!

Nice version Tom. Great voice you have there buddy!