You have two beautiful instruments and you can tell you know how to play them both! I also love your own play on the words. It works. Good song, Good work!

Beautiful vocal....

Beautiful vocal....nice atmosphere

very nice words & fine rhyming

Such a pretty song and I like your lyric.

another beauty

love your voice

No singing? This got a vibe but really requires song!

well sung ....the sound is like ive just wandered into a huge empty house to find out where the musics coming from....nice piano

like your voice and then you splashed into the deep blue sea it was a wonderful splash.........

just my own weird association but this reminds me of music from the old Nintendo. I like it.

Isn't this such a crazy, great song. I don't care who plays or sings it, I love it. Nice stuff.

groovy groove

It sounds lovely but you need to get the voice louder in the mix

good skills. i like that. moldy peachesy, sorta

beautiful

Very cool title - lovely piece.

(rerecord guitar, lower main vocals, needs percussion? probably - ask people)