Uneven Bars

beginnin reminds me of 'the knife', a song called 'like a pen'.

Uneven Bras! very good stuff.

I like this a lot.

Way cool! This really drives! Nice!

Ooh, I like my rhythm hot.

It starts out with trashcan drumming.. makes me want to move! Then it evolves with all the rhythmic synth layers... I likey.. If you are passively looking for input, I'd recommend thinking about how to utilize more negative space to emphasize that trash can rhythm at parts...I think you do this in a different way.. in sections rather than throughout the track.. and well, my recommendation comes with a big fat disclaimer... I tend to want to hear the wall of sound layers deferring to tribal beats :-) , Maybe gate or cut out parts of those polyrhythms on certain beats. I like the grinding end too.