Thanks Bethan! There are words, but they won't be added until I have a chance to clean up the vocals a bit. So far, I am lovin it here. Cruizin around listenin to great artists - and this site is so user friendly!
This is a short piece written for a friend who is developing a computer game for his degree. It needed to be loopable, hence the abrupt start and finish! Still a work in progress so i'd appreciate any comments about making it better
One day as I was turning into my driveway I saw Rita on her porch. She's a lot like me.
AL & RITA Capo @2 in C
C stepping down to F
Al was a smoker. He's dead now, of course
Al has Alzheimer's. Alcohol made it worse
D stepping down…
key of C - no capo
We listen for years for words to explain ourselves. "I'm good but not THAT good," was such a moment for me. Good enough to stay in the game but never good enough to win.
Last night I kissed somebody
I kissed somebody…
In the corner stands a guitar that plays only sad songs
Give me when a friend lost his wife
And this fine leather jacket came in a package
The day after he took his own life
In a bar down in Austin, he was drinkin' and boastin'
This ring…
In the corner stands a guitar that plays only sad songs
Give me when a friend lost his wife
And this fine leather jacket came in a package
The day after he took his own life
In a bar down in Austin, he was drinkin' and boastin'
This ring…
I was in Spain, in the Pyrenees, working on THE STONE RAFT. I was the only American. I was lonely.
SOLITARY WALK Am
INTRO Am F Am F
Am G F Am
Tho I follow in the footprints of my friends
And the road I walk down has been tramped…
My mom is 91 and still holding on.
The people that help her make it thru
each day have learned that there is no
sense in arguing with her about who they
are or when it is...thus the song.
MAMA HAS A TIME MACHINE key - Em
Mama has a…
Anyone see the pelicans and the dead fish floating in the oil? (In the midst of the Great Gulf Leak.)
I'M NOT GONNA CRY
Oil-covered pelicans smother
Feathered brother.
I'm not gonna cry.
I'm not gonna cry
Turtles and dolphins and…
What's to say? That we actually have anything to do with what our government does? Ha! Even Woody Guthrie knew the truth. They just leave that verse out of his "anthem".
No Man's Land
Easy come, easy go. Nothing lasts for long
Pay your…
THE LEAP
Well, a man took a walk down a trail with his buddies. Everybody came along.
And they came to a cravis with a pumas at the bottom and he was singing this song
"Well, you can go back or you can leap forward, or you can leave it up…
Same old story.
Something just broke and I think it's my heart.
It wasn't an arrow. It wasn't a dart.
Mighta been a meteor that tore it apart
Something just broke and I think it's my heart.
Something just broke and I think it's my heart…
You look out the window and the creek is swelling. Slowly crossing the lawn and heading up the driveway.... Time to get the lawnmower to higher ground.
TODAY IT’S GONNA RAIN - Key C
G
Today it’s gonna…
Comments on Rhonie's stuff
Heavenly!
the praise genre is not really my cup o tea, but your voice is heavenly :)
Beautiful melodies!
Really nice sounding production and vocals are great!
Well done.
Great vocals and keys.
Sweet tune , you nailed it. Great mix also.
Nice piece.
Thanks Bethan! There are words, but they won't be added until I have a chance to clean up the vocals a bit. So far, I am lovin it here. Cruizin around listenin to great artists - and this site is so user friendly!
Oh my, this is gorgeous. Welcome to this wonderful place.
Comments made by Rhonie
Great piece!
Very nice - yes, a good start - let us know when you finish it!
Beautiful lyric and chord progression - love the female vocal and background harmonies and the overall sentiment of the piece - well done!
nice piece - nice vocals and harmonies
very nice - love the way it builds
Beautiful!
great song!
Love the guitar in this one
this is a well crafted piece
love the sound of this one
you are truely gifted!
your vocals remind me of Neil Young on this and many of your other pieces - love your stuff man!!
great tune, lyrics, harmonies!
love the message here
love your wit and your writing skills - both lyrically and musically - you put me in mind of John Prine a bit.
this put me in mind of Bo Didly a bit
a fun piece
very interesting - different - a little wacky - but I like it!
good song all around - well crafted!
very nice!