Untitled Volume (Version 2.0)

I can’t tell if this song is good or if I just like it because it’s fun to jam over the ending.

This was one of my 50/90 gimmicks. I was planning on a bunch of songs with lyrics where each verse/chorus was a haiku. In the end I only did it a couple of times and in each case the melodies turned out pretty bad and difficult to sing. I was more concerned with counting syllables than singability.

For this second version I rewrote the whole melody. I tell myself I did it to make it more… ya know… melodic, but the honest truth is I probably just dumbed it down so I could have an easier time singing it… and then I sang like crap anyway.

But the ending is a lot of fun to jam over.

Guitars are all Gibson Les Paul Standard 50s and the amps are all Fender Bassbreaker 15. Pedals on the rhythm tracks were a Mooer E-Lady into a Keeley Super Phat Mod into a Ryra the Klone. Lead pedals were a Dunlop Cry Baby into the Ryra into a Wren and Cuff Super Russian.

I can’t explain this
it went down way too quickly
Hang on for your life

no explanation
No other choice for you now
there’s no exit plan

untitled volume
No thoughts on what to do next
I gave at the door