Actually, according to the interweb, there seems to be a good chance that Elvis really was of Scottish or Irish descent, so you might be on to something here... ;)
I hear a lot of songs on here this site with cool recording stuff like the birds at the beginning of this song. How cool!
This song is rad. creeping piano. good halloween song
**Song-writing Demo for FAWM 2025**
Song number 01
Written Saturday-Sunday 1st-2nd February 2025
Written 1st-2nd Feb
Demo recorded 2nd Feb
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I wasn't gonna do this FAWM thing this year, but they sent me an email...
And then I wrote…
Song 9# for my 2025 RPM Challenge. The finishing line is near. I wrote this song last night - it emerged out of the burning heart ache I've experienced since the death of my beloved 13 year old dog Maxwell (died last May) - my love for him is…
Sometimes writing a song is the very best and only thing you can do....
Cold Winter Moon
Oh cold winter moon
And the wind that blows
Bring me a change
For my weary soul
Take away this longing
That fills my heart
Something is over…
My words, ai demo.
Your clothes are in the wardrobe
And your books are on the shelf
I wander from room to room
Talking quietly to myself
How can I see my future
When you’re standing in the way?
Every morning I wake up, I’m in
Tomorrow…
Guitars/Mandolin: Doug Sparling
Composer: Traditional
Recorded: 2005
A couple of nice reels played on guitar, the first is The Cup of Tea, can't remember the name of the second one. Unfortunately my midi flute scratch track got added in the mix…
(Song 4)
Hair net tossed on the table
Name tag still pinned to my shirt
Work boots wait on the front step
but they might walk out on me too
I've got no one left to care for
No one left to hear my prayer
Talking to the kitchen window…
this is all chris. except i went the route of playing synthesized drums, which was a gas. at one time i couldn't stand the sound of them. but i knew they would fit his song. i think this is a very interesting journey.
A strange beast that began back in 2021 as a chord progression that didn't go anywhere. I finally knuckled down and finished it. It has a somewhat awkward transition from verse to chorus, but when I tried shifting either to accommodate the other…
I come up to the surface
And take a breath on my return
Crystal waters on the surface
Light gets swallowed down below
And it’s the same way with my feelings
About you they stay much the same
Twenty years wrapped up in paper
Tied it up…
Another one for Steve, our amazing bass player….a BIG Planet of the Apes fan.
I never followed Those movies, but he assures me that he’s kept within the bounds of the narrative.
-Lyrics…
Comments on thetworegs's stuff
Very cool Rhode keys!
Nice one!
Nice keys!
Brilliant!
Swanky cool!
Hahaha, genius!
Mmmmmmmmmm.......maybe.
Actually, according to the interweb, there seems to be a good chance that Elvis really was of Scottish or Irish descent, so you might be on to something here... ;)
Now I could animate you at the piano with crazy dancing. Wouldn't have to change your leg movement much.
Freaky mate. Especially whilst having a cup of tea! I like it
Ooh, kinda sinister! Looking forward to the video. :-D
Fun take on the famous story. It's very well done!
Incredibly emotional - fantastic vocal.
Agree with Gu Djin, this has a real mix of feels - very effective!
Atmospheric and a little creepy. Could work well with a fair tale, or a spooky sequence in a movie. Leigh
nice one, atmospheric.
I hear a lot of songs on here this site with cool recording stuff like the birds at the beginning of this song. How cool! This song is rad. creeping piano. good halloween song
That's lovely, really nice.
I agree with bethan, your voice makes the tune.
crazy dancing is fun !
Comments made by thetworegs
Laid back and lovely…
That bass is shaking the car down and dirty
Another year older waiting for your FAWN 26 submission
Poor old Maxwell at least he was loved
I’m liking the piano sounds like a real one rather than midi but I’m probably wrong
Got a great 80’s vibe going with that synth
The UK stops on 2 inches of snow good luck with the next 3 months were hoping not to drown in all this rain
A beautiful song beautifully sung
Great vocal
smooth as butter
Excellent
Smooth excellence vocal and backer
Slick recording
nice string work
excellent productions and vocal great lyrics "Talking to the kitchen window Like someone out there still cares"
they work treat it sounds like you both had a blast
That was a ride
You vocal drew me in ….
Nicely done great production
Excellent