The Bloody Colonel

the music adds a dimension to the reading that is very powerful,,, it's neat the way they balance together so well, neither over powering or detracting from the other,, this is sort of like a collage of sound,, well done

nice work Reg!

I agree with Norm - there is a lot coming down.

I've a suggestion for where that last bullet should go. Calamitous and yearning musical background well done.

1st voice: how, he still reads newspapers? 2nd voice, answers: probably yes ... 1st voice bewilderment: why does he do it? Third voice (presumably female): he thinks it it the way to join the world. 1st voice, thoughtfully: Yeah ... How much he still must go to ... ~communication breakdown~

Are you working for CNN now? lol cool one Reggy!

This is going to get even uglier.