This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
You know Colleen, the musicians that have responded to your post are known for collaborating on some great tunes with good results. We send mp3s to each other in exact keys to make long distance tracks together.....Just a thought. Evets
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
It's good to have you here with us as a part of the AloneTone family. Randy did a beautiful job on the piano -- well executed tones1 He's got the touch. You have a sweet voice. I enjoy your delivery. Keep it gorgeous!
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This is my first upload. I mostly have a vocal here. It's a song that I'd love to get some collaboration on from the guitarists in the community. Let me know what you think?
This song's going on 32 years old...
Some 12 years older than I was when I wrote it!!
I borrowed the title from one of my favourite madrigals, The Silver Swan by Orlando Gibbons:
"The silver swan who living hath no note, when death approached…
Here is my entry for the "Who Knew" Song Writing Challenge. Thanks for including me :)
Lyrics:
When I was a young boy
I never knew what it meant
to be unloved
When I was a young man
I never knew what it meant
to be undone
Now I’m…
This is really a cool song... some essence of Bowie coming to me. Your vocals are really haunting. In times where we're listening and giving accolades in this digital media, know that your music brings us all together! Although I will admit to a fantasy of bringing all us alone toners together live for the funnest jam session ever! Thanks for this great song!!! An instant fav
Imagining my band imaginary band in my head on one of those 60's type music shows. Just having fun with this one nothing too serious lyrically like solving world peace or finding high consciousness ..although it really is a true story.
Somehow you guys make even creepy subject matter sound happy! Love the vibe on this. Who Knew that this challenge would bring out such different stories in every song's approach to the topic. Great one!
Here is my contribution to the latest song writing challenge posted in the Alonetone Forum.
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Who Knew when I first met you
That all your troubles would be mine
And you’d be coming around again…
Here is my contribution to the latest song writing challenge posted in the Alonetone Forum.
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Who Knew when I first met you
That all your troubles would be mine
And you’d be coming around again…
from the Poisonous EP
wait for the worry lines, the worry lines
to disappear
they get me every time, me every time
that you are near
won’t let you get inside, this heart of mine
i must be strong
you knew you’d get to me, you’d get to…
Original. I wanted to paint a picture of a long, cold walk through the pouring rain. The longer you listen the stranger the atmosphere becomes. It could be haunted!
Imagining my band imaginary band in my head on one of those 60's type music shows. Just having fun with this one nothing too serious lyrically like solving world peace or finding high consciousness ..although it really is a true story.
Comments on Colleen Dillon's stuff
Beautiful stuff
Uplifting loveliness.
That's some beautiful piano...beautiful vocal too...
Soooo pretty.
There you go. Nice with an English muffin and a cuppa - Hawaiian blend.
What a beautiful voice! And such a pretty young lady...
You know Colleen, the musicians that have responded to your post are known for collaborating on some great tunes with good results. We send mp3s to each other in exact keys to make long distance tracks together.....Just a thought. Evets
Great vocal sound, I like it.
Great song...beautiful piano work...really good lyrics...and of course your lovely voice.
Very nice and well recorded.
Thanks everyone for the positive support! This is a great forum, and a fun way to spend time with like minded people on a -2 degree day here in MN
Beautiful . . . This is a keeper! REALLY nice!
Oh, btw, fabulous lyrics!
It's good to have you here with us as a part of the AloneTone family. Randy did a beautiful job on the piano -- well executed tones1 He's got the touch. You have a sweet voice. I enjoy your delivery. Keep it gorgeous!
Beautiful song
an excellent song...more Colleen Please!!
Thanks everyone for your feedback!!!
This could be a hit.
You are singing in the key of B. This is very cool.
Very cool.
Comments made by Colleen Dillon
Enjoying a dip into a playlist by you! Your music is just awesome! Thanks for my Sunday afternoon soundtrack.
This is awesome! I love the guitar riff. Perfect backdrop for your strong lyrics and heartfelt vocals. Another amazing addition to Who Knew!!
love the lyrics of this song! Really cool way your beautiful voice winds in and out. Great one!
This is really a cool song... some essence of Bowie coming to me. Your vocals are really haunting. In times where we're listening and giving accolades in this digital media, know that your music brings us all together! Although I will admit to a fantasy of bringing all us alone toners together live for the funnest jam session ever! Thanks for this great song!!! An instant fav
Came back for another listen. This one is really a fav!!!!
Somehow you guys make even creepy subject matter sound happy! Love the vibe on this. Who Knew that this challenge would bring out such different stories in every song's approach to the topic. Great one!
Love the songwriting challenge! Lots of fun!!!!! Thanks Greg!
"Ain't feelin' it!" What a great line! I love this one!
That last guest was me! Forgot to sign in. Love this one Greg!!
The Proods are a perfect complement to a easy Sunday morning! Thanks for being part of my soundtrack while getting the day on!
Beautiful arrangement. Really pulls you in.
Thank you for this. A beautiful song for a lovely country. Music can cure even the worst pain.
Oops that last comment was from me. Thanks for listening!!
Perfect! Just like you described.
A clever twist! Cool!!!
Amazing! Really pulls you in
Wow! Love this one too!
Beautiful and soothing
This is just cooler than cool! I love it!!! Makes me want to get out and dance
like this... mellow sexy stuff!