Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

Thanks Brett

very cool.

Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

Thanks fairynuff : )

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

nice..

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

I hear you, brother.

Thank you fairynuff!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Impressive guitar work and very listenable. Super!

Cool groove, melodic and strange too. Nice job!

Like the song guys, reminiscent of a 60s sound to me. nice to hear from you again.

Thanks Tom. I have another almost done, and also one you might want to work with. : )

Nice acoustic cover, your voice and guitar strips the song back and gives it some soul!

Melancholic but engaging and beautiful at the same time

I’m happy that you enjoyed it Psychic Sperm. : )

Glad you liked it Jason!

Thank you Fudgetusk

Thanks Brett

Haha! Thanks for listening Tom. I enjoyed making it, and it became a bit more light hearted as I went along.

Impressive cover Tom! Great atmosphere and emotion shows through here. Very nice!

Nice cover Tom. I think your voice is great for this song. Great sound!

Thanks guest. : )

Like this a lot. You express the feeling very convincingly and bring the words to life. Great!

Thanks keycrazy. I try to keep it interesting. I’m grateful to you for listening carefully and commenting on my music.

Suits your style well. Tom will be applauding from heaven I reckon. Good job!

Beautiful acoustic song Tom. Great performance!

Really nice sound and feel to this. Wish I could sing as well as you Tom! Great!

Atmospheric sound and great vocals Tom! The chord syncing sounds difficult but you made an excellent job of it. Great job!