I'm not usually into four-on-the-floor kinda EDM/dance numbers, but something about your track really appeals to me. The different textures/sounds are a welcome change from the usual stuff i, well.. tend to avoid. ;-)
Thank you for posting it, doktordoktor. I'm really enjoying it! ^_^
Inspired by a large stone I saw in the Ortspark in Munich, which somebody had carefully engraved with the name Mabel.
No loops used this time, all virtual instruments played by me. Cymbal, guitar, acoustic guitar, violin.
Inspired by a large stone I saw in the Ortspark in Munich, which somebody had carefully engraved with the name Mabel.
No loops used this time, all virtual instruments played by me. Cymbal, guitar, acoustic guitar, violin.
Rad stuff, Steve! It sounds like you're exploring new and exciting territories with your last few songs. Looking forward to hearing what comes next. :)
Lyrics by Tom Browning
Slight, crooked teeth,
I hear behind the screens so blind
Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Down, in the suit that we wear,
It's in the suit that we share.
Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find
That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide
Through, the dirt,
Spring pinches it's deadly grip
An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it
Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen.
Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Damn! Feels good to hit the Upload button again!
Completed RPM 17. this is the last track!!. the album is my first run through with logic pro ( dumping pro tools and the monthly subscription fee)
I feel great playing again.. been so long…
Greg Connor, Scott Zosel and I wrote this one today around my coffee table. It's been awhile since we've had a chance to do that, and it felt like "going home" a bit to us...
We wrote this in support of all those who are trying to find the…
Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!
Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!
He can't play nicely or share his toys
He always takes from the other boys
Got no time for music or vids
Doesn't act like the other kids
Does Donald
Don't let Donald play
He's gonna spoil your day
Believe his words if you must
But only…
Em
Well, some folks got big noses
Some folks got big ass
Some folks stand out in the aisle
Make it hard to pass
Am
Some folks got money
Em
They say, “That’s just how it goes.”
B7 A
They make it hard for folks like me
Am Em
To keep…
This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!
He can't play nicely or share his toys
He always takes from the other boys
Got no time for music or vids
Doesn't act like the other kids
Does Donald
Don't let Donald play
He's gonna spoil your day
Believe his words if you must
But only…
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.
Lyrics: Mike Graszyk
Vocals, Vocal Melody: Jessica Rasche
Guitars: Derek Barlas
Bass: George Schiessl
Drums: Ole Kirkeby
Original Music & Production: Steffen Offermann
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Thanks Brett
I like the classic style and this was definitely an earworm for me -Tom
very nice dok
this is great
Haha! Thanks for listening Tom. I enjoyed making it, and it became a bit more light hearted as I went along.
I enjoyed what you did here, Steve! I can imagine this being the soundtrack to a remixed Road Runner cartoon.
Cool upbeat vibe on this one, Steve! Fun stuff!
I received your last kind comment and wanted to thank you. Blessings upon you, dear sir. Blessings upon your people.
Thanks guest. : )
very nice-as always!
Thanks keycrazy. I try to keep it interesting. I’m grateful to you for listening carefully and commenting on my music.
I'm not usually into four-on-the-floor kinda EDM/dance numbers, but something about your track really appeals to me. The different textures/sounds are a welcome change from the usual stuff i, well.. tend to avoid. ;-) Thank you for posting it, doktordoktor. I'm really enjoying it! ^_^
tony south dakotah loves you for your comments on his tracks on Alonetone, and he deeply thanks you.
Digging this one, Steve! The melodies, chords, and drums blend nicely with each other. Super cool closing solo too!
Great original music!
Sounds like you've stumbled onto a vibe that would fit right in on the new Blade Runner movie's soundtrack; great work here, Steve!
Thanks for your continued support Tom. This was an attempt at a techno sounding tune with enough, but not too many instruments. Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks Brett. I had the idea, and then was a bit nervous about the end result to be honest. Thanks for your kind words
I like it, it's simple and strange, but it's pretty and works!
Rad stuff, Steve! It sounds like you're exploring new and exciting territories with your last few songs. Looking forward to hearing what comes next. :)
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Like train sound, clever intro. Hypnotic sound, quick! Pass me the pipe : )
Love it! Blues/ fleetwood mac sound.
Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.
Great guitar tones. Reminds me a bit of Wishbone Ash. Cool!
Moody and deep, enjoy the guitar tone and your expressive vocals Tom.
Excellent Steffen! Emotional without sounding miserable, as James said.
Lovely! Really well expressed and performed. Good job Colleen and the guys
Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.
Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!
Lovely vocals. Great expression in your voice, this number suits you well, good work Tom!
Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!
Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!
Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)
Thank you fairynuff!
James, love this! Neil Young sound to it, and great, funny lyrics.
Cool. Like the guitar start. Reminiscent of Bolan to me, rocked up and psychedelic. Very nice Brett, been waiting for more music from you!
This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.
Multi layered this time Tom.like the extra guitar coming in. It sounds great. Not easy song to carry off but you have done a very good job. Super!
Atmospheric, great tune, nice singing, well mixed, I really like it. Well done Steffen!