Tumbling Down (demo)
drorkessler
I think this song is about falling in love … the way attraction can be a sort of a shortcut … and the way real love feels.
I’m working on this track as part of my RPM/2012 effort. This version is simply the first cut recorded on my iPhone to make the melody stick. Hopefully I will be recording a more polished version.
Hope you like it … let me know … lyrics below:
I’m drifting through the vastness of time
To days when you were mine
We’re playing hide and seek beneath the vines
Your hair as smooth as wine
Your breast is as warm as summer fire
But your eyes they tell a lie
And I’m tumbling down the stairways of your mind
You see I’ve been there before
Where warm bodies make for time
Where open arms and legs brings life
To ones that should be tired
Where people that are bound to be free
Are wedlock to retire
Now I’m tumbling down the stairways of your mind
[bridge]
But now I’m overdosed by kindness
Of a girl that’s never mine
Her body is a palace I serve
Her gates are were I lie
And when we’re all alone, at night
She’s walking on a wire
As she’s tumbling down the stairways of her mind
It has all the hallmarks of a really good song, I like the singer/acoustic sound. Good luck with your RPM
Great tune ,WEell played. Man some tuff acts to follow here tonite! Have ta dig out my lucky guitar pics and lucky socks too.