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This track was created as part of the October 2010 Alonetone 24 hr challenge. The challenge is to make 24 minutes of original music in one 24 hour period.
he’s not blown away like a stray star
he’s not stolen clean away by a fast car
but he was straight up irresistable
skin like polished marble I was waiting
for the chance to say
I wanna make your day
a little bit brighter
a little bit lighter
he’s not cast away like a failure
he’s not standing on the ledge for a saviour
but he was straight up irresistable
eyes blue like a waterfall
I’m waiting for the chance to dive in
I wanna make your day a little bit brighter
a little bit lighter
Vestigial Remorse
said
I love the mixture of dark and light in the sound, the music really adds to the lyrics
richardlaceves
said
really fine,, glad i discovered this, thanks to Kirk's recent comment,, ive missed hearing your lovely vocals
Guest
said
So ethereal, lovely vocal Tess and I like the use of the piano. Dreamy track guys!
Johnny Stone
said
Nice very nice. This is really good love it. And thanks for listening and commenting mate.
Guest
said
elusive sound, enjoying it!
Guest
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Ha, well said Gumbo. Some ethereal maid! Loving the spooky music. Mum
Gumbo
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Nice work you two. I love the bell-like quality to the keys. That 'high-heels in a cathedral' feel. Cool!
An interesting composition, Sweet vocals, smooth vocals, thoughtful lyrics, nice mix down work.