I first heard this song yesterday when I was listening to you reading "I bury my dead", and I immediately loved it. I'm sure I would have loved it without hearing the story too, but it sure adds a lot of meaning and depths to it. Great work, James!

Hey, that's an unexpected style from you. Nice old-school (60s) feel.

You are a proof for my conviction that a good lyric is a requirement for a good song. All your lyrics are great IMO, and so are your songs.

interesting song,,,very nice story telling,, i think i'll need to listen a few more times

Great great James. I like the picture you took of him thru the window on FB.

Wonderful that you got to do this while he's still around to appreciate it!

This is really beautifully done.

Well, at least you know who you are, that's a lot more than some.

Great song James!

Love it James!

Dig it! Oh yeah.... LG

Beautiful song, Jim.

honesty and info rolled into a nice melodic thread. enjoyed very much. Telsa. thanks JMT!

Right on, I would say.

Good stuff, James!

It's great the way you remember so many of the details of your life. You so beautifully weave bits of memory into a story cloth. Every line holds my attention always waiting for your next thought. Thanks again for sharing your amazingly human and heartfelt stories.

I can relate to this. Good one Al

Song well done and voice good. Guitar and chords very nice. Not sure about the way words fit, or something, sounds too much like a commercial. Just a collection of facts.

love the stumbling drunk feel to the bass and drums great vocal

Wow, great choir, James! This song sounds like a soundtrack of a historical film. Monumental! Regards, Steffen

...a song to be remembered for...

I hear ya, Buddy... but that guitar has incredible presence. (pyropool@earthlink.net)

"Plays out like a movie for me. Nice storytelling 👌" Vicki Me...Yes, but does the autism show? Vicki...Not necessarily. But the talent for music and creative expression coupled with the line voice of the narrator yearning to connect with others is pretty tell-tale imho It’s a recurrent theme. Even your social justice stance of anti-war. The outsider. The outlier. High intelligence and love of literature… Enter Vicki-Lee Peaceful nature Enter Vicki-Lee Vicki-Lee Cayrouse Not many other aspies have a handle on this too good. It would come down to sensory issues really. But if it’s not autism (Asperger’s syndrome) it’s probably something neurodivergent. And that could be ADHD (not always hyperactive presentation but more a neurology and the way you think) or bipolar (creatives) or something like sound synesthesia or dyslexia etc

If you don’t have Asperger’s syndrome or what is now known in the US as Autism Level 1 — I’ll eat my hat. It’s not to alarm or upset you, I just think we’re so like minded and you show so many traits. Your musical gift would then make you what’s called ‘twice exceptional.’ Look into it and see if it ‘vibes.’ Melbourne Vicki

Touching song...beautifully done. Thank you for listening to my songs.

Rafi Arkin said, "Great story and song. I didn’t listen to it all as I’m trying to get through more songs on the list, but what I did hear I liked and enjoyed reading the rest of the lyrics too. Thought some of the verse melody notes were a little obvious and I could see them being stretched slightly but that shows I was into it. Wish I could write song stories like that!"

Rosemarie Kempton said, "This is a song I could happily listen to over and over again. Great music and lyrics!"

"Powerful song." Rose Kempton

What an interesting combining of such desperate genres...

Love what happens @ 1:17.

You really capture late 60s here. Especially the keys...

ROCK & ROLL!!! Sooo clean!

Sparce and beautiful.

Some beautiful "awkward tinkering..."

Great track...and, you know it's true.

"This is wonderful. You are a chanteur." Alicia Gradson

Tony Cherry How did you get that voicing on this track? Keyboard?

Susannah Garza "Lovely"

"Beautiful song..." Bruce Balmer

Jeremy Menson - Guitar addicts "...brother I love this!"