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The Memory of You

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If I just slip the car in drive
I’ll meet you on the other side
Or maybe I could turn back time
And we could both pretend to fly

Losing feeling inside out
No sense kneeling, no such doubt

Failed at saving, nothing lasts
Just repaving my own past
Overlooking the river from the ledge
Feel the shiver, wheels on the edge

The water runs to the river
The river runs to the sea
Maybe it’ll deliver
You back to me

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another cultural landslide said

This is wonderful! And the meter change even better!

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Gary Fox said

Great song, Keith, I love the structure and counterpoint you used here.

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Sister Savage said

"And we could both pretend to fly" - wow, what a lyric. Gorgeous opener!

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Bethan Mathis said

Great lyric. Certainly struck a chord with me.

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albinoSQUIRREL (Todd Larsen) said

Excellent. I really like this.