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This track was created as part of the October 2010 Alonetone 24 hr challenge. The challenge is to make 24 minutes of original music in one 24 hour period.

he’s not blown away like a stray star
he’s not stolen clean away by a fast car
but he was straight up irresistable
skin like polished marble I was waiting
for the chance to say
I wanna make your day
a little bit brighter
a little bit lighter
he’s not cast away like a failure
he’s not standing on the ledge for a saviour
but he was straight up irresistable
eyes blue like a waterfall
I’m waiting for the chance to dive in
I wanna make your day a little bit brighter
a little bit lighter

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Merry Bear said

An interesting composition, Sweet vocals, smooth vocals, thoughtful lyrics, nice mix down work.

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Greg Connor said

Beautiful. It just carries the listener away.

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Wildgeas Music said

Sweet harmony.......

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kavin. said

how the hail did I miss this? woaw

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Vestigial Remorse said

I love the mixture of dark and light in the sound, the music really adds to the lyrics

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richardlaceves said

really fine,, glad i discovered this, thanks to Kirk's recent comment,, ive missed hearing your lovely vocals

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kirklynch said

More Elusive Gene Please!

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The Old Grey Wolf Ltd Co said

I drift away to somewhere nice ...

Guest said

So ethereal, lovely vocal Tess and I like the use of the piano. Dreamy track guys!

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igor said

~dream sounds duo~ ~brighter, lighter, away...~

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Reefwalker said

One of my favs on the album..Both of you did a great job here.

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Memoir said

My day, officially brightened.

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Johnny Stone said

Nice very nice. This is really good love it. And thanks for listening and commenting mate.

Guest said

elusive sound, enjoying it!

Guest said

Ha, well said Gumbo. Some ethereal maid! Loving the spooky music. Mum

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Gumbo said

Nice work you two. I love the bell-like quality to the keys. That 'high-heels in a cathedral' feel. Cool!

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