Running Away
Another song in the works that I have never been happy with. Now that Mr. Tolar has me feeding raw meat to the Ibanez, this is the result. So, it’s either a rocker, or I’m off my rocker!
Lyrics:
It was yesterday
when she said
she’s leaving today
our little girl
says shes gonna run away
She’s leavin now
headed down the open road
she ain’t eighteen
but we let her go anyhow
shes runnin away
cant understand why she would’nt stay
shes runnin away
It was late today
when I heard the telephone
she was so far away
and I heard her
cry for me
She’s lonely now
lookin’ for some open road
she turned eighteen
now we can’t tell her no
shes runnin away
cant understand why she would’nt stay
shes runnin away
another day
when I heard the doorbell ring
I was happy to see
she had a smile for me
she ain’t leaving now
it’s end of the open road
and with her smile
Daddy can I stay for a while
she came back home today
I'm still alive *WildGeas
this is an old classic.
I had an older brother who ran away several times. I never thought of writing a song from the perspective of a parent. Good idea. ER
here is where the new york poem went. i will also repost. thanks for asking http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DMdcQxFdJW0
Great tune! Tight breaks!!
(You have THE BEST doorbell ring evah.)
this song is very memorable.
ouch. Great raw music, with a powerful message sent to the heart of this other protective dad. :-) I liked your use of the guitar as the doorbell.
*and with her smile Daddy can I stay for a while* :-) Love a happy ending, and yes, this is a rocker.
nice one!
Really like the lyrics too :)
yea! Thats cool man! Great song. Like the part where you use the whammy bar. Thats awesome!
Sorry Paul, I messed up my first comment. You are writing some really good songs, and I can hear the Ibanez chewing!