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I was depressed at my caliber of friends when I had a drug problem. This was the result. LYRICS: Most my friends are embryonic Most my friends are hooked on phonics Most my friends stick to the comics page Most my friends are disillusioned…
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Newbold said

what is a friend? , friend?

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This song was a challenge to write . . . LYRICS: Order for your protection under threat of a gun You might be confined here till the damage is done Lock him up and toss the key It's for your own good Straightjacket Done Tie me…
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Vestigial Remorse said

Kick@ss Vox dude! Nice and disturbing as it should be :D

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This song was a challenge to write . . . LYRICS: Order for your protection under threat of a gun You might be confined here till the damage is done Lock him up and toss the key It's for your own good Straightjacket Done Tie me…
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Guest said

Cor, dig that descending bass!

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I can't really help myself. *updated audio 5-17-12
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Guest said

What a cool groovy rock song, you have that dream theater mini sound with the breaks and all...wish it was louder tho..well done.

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I have no money. That sucks. Disclaimer: One of my buddies, Chris Schugg, wrote the riff heard during the verses back in 2005 and gave me his blessings to use it. (He's pretty much set his guitar down for good, if you can believe that…
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Guest said

Smart playing! Really excellent jamming tune!

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I have no money. That sucks. Disclaimer: One of my buddies, Chris Schugg, wrote the riff heard during the verses back in 2005 and gave me his blessings to use it. (He's pretty much set his guitar down for good, if you can believe that…
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Guest said

Not my usual sort of music but I think this is particulary well done. Would have like the vocals just a shade more up front in the mix. Did I say great playing.......Willie

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First song of 2011 . . . LYRICS: She has a disease Never learned to please anyone else other than herself Fuck the world and give em hell She's down on her knees Swaying in the breeze and when she leans that way I go along Bending…
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James Michael Taylor said

Crossing Guns and Roses and The Beatles...great mix and harmonies. Like the elongated beat.

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Everyone has had one of those special nights . . . (The strings are not a sample.) UPDATED AUDIO 1-20-12 LYRICS: Sneak out and slip into the night Shotgun we're going for a ride Forget your curfew Everything will be all right…
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James Michael Taylor said

You rock too...

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Everyone has had one of those special nights . . . (The strings are not a sample.) UPDATED AUDIO 1-20-12 LYRICS: Sneak out and slip into the night Shotgun we're going for a ride Forget your curfew Everything will be all right…
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crackitopen said

got a great offbeat flavor...like it

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I'm getting sick of the same old chords. LYRICS: I'm retarded I'm a stooge I can keep myself amused Have a hand in my abuse Set a spark and light the fuse I'm retarded I am rude I am average I'm obtuse We don't use that word…
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Richard Hardrick said

cool!!!!

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Sometimes I hate everyone. LYRICS: Do I remember? I forget Self-delusional sensitive mess Cannot exist without a complaint Cannot resist without a restraint Is it amnesia or ambivalence Cowardice or self-defense I know enough to…
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kirklynch said

Oddly appealing! I know the feeling! Dig that angular guitar solo!

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Some people need to fall down every now and then. LYRICS: Won't you ever go away cause I feel the same way too Did you have your kicks and eat them too Did you ever cross the line I confess is undefined Did you have your taste of…
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Guest said

Cool tune.

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First song of 2011 . . . LYRICS: She has a disease Never learned to please anyone else other than herself Fuck the world and give em hell She's down on her knees Swaying in the breeze and when she leans that way I go along Bending…
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hojorising said

This is a great tune, Jane's Addiction meets Gary Numan

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First song of 2011 . . . LYRICS: She has a disease Never learned to please anyone else other than herself Fuck the world and give em hell She's down on her knees Swaying in the breeze and when she leans that way I go along Bending…
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Guest said

beatlesque !

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One day I'm going to write a symphony. It gets heavy after the first 30 seconds.
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Guest said

yo

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I was going to do vocals for this one, but I haven't come up with a good melody yet.
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kirklynch said

Very cool! Dig the guitar work!

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Another old demo from 2006
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Guest said

Awesome!!!!

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Some people need to fall down every now and then. LYRICS: Won't you ever go away cause I feel the same way too Did you have your kicks and eat them too Did you ever cross the line I confess is undefined Did you have your taste of…
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Vestigial Remorse said

Cool song - I like the mellow vocals compared to the heavier music, makes for an interesting sound

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Some people need to fall down every now and then. LYRICS: Won't you ever go away cause I feel the same way too Did you have your kicks and eat them too Did you ever cross the line I confess is undefined Did you have your taste of…
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kirklynch said

Nice! Can't go wrong with cowbell AND feedback!

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From now on, asterisk = final version . . . Anyways, the moment was long overdue for a redo. ;)
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kirklynch said

Excellent work!

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