Well cool track, cheers Slap...

Awesome..the mood of the song is great...

patiently awaiting the (7/8 done) version!

This song just keeps getting better & better; hell, I found this stuck in my head last night & it wouldn't go away...

Beautiful...calm, serene, sad and reflective. Have you ever listened to The Innocents Mission? I really enjoyed listening to you, Sudara. Thank you for creating. PEACE!

dude your voice is awesome on this tune. Great lyrics too. Dara is diggin' this one too. commenting while test driving... ;)

instruments sounds great. ^ ^ check mine .

I like how the elec geetar accents the emotions (sorrow & pride, etc.)Piano sounds great and nice ending

ohhh....

This is a really beautiful song. I can't wait to hear the finished version. Who was singing harmony?

This is just plain wonderful - even unfinished. You could even leave this as is. Excellent!

WOW! unbelievable. really.

I am really enjoying this tune! It has a rolling, melancholy quality with a razor's edge.

ha! you are right davey, especially for in progress stuff. I just had the itch to share it.

now it's my turn. how come you are not posting these on MT, Sudara? hahahaha

Be patient, the choruses is missing, as is the nice soft bass, a sprinkle of piano and a bit more of that electric guitar.

who knew feedback could be so delicious?

Beautiful demo...can't wait to hear the finished track!

Bravo! Damn this is poignant! Great work. Very 'raw' emotions.

i really like this tune

I bought it!