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Salty air smokey lungs Footprints in the sand Leading to the woods Can you breathe it in? And still shadows lurk Tempting my mind The trees drop fire Burn down before my eyes Oh no, where did you go? On the reef you cut your palms…
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Safety In Rhythms said

I liked the lyrics. Nice song!

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Salty air smokey lungs Footprints in the sand Leading to the woods Can you breathe it in? And still shadows lurk Tempting my mind The trees drop fire Burn down before my eyes Oh no, where did you go? On the reef you cut your palms…
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JR James said

Nice way of recording with that harmony and some verb on it. Really enjoyed this :)

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Oh, it's fall again, Autumn leaves are sweeping in, Came and went like the tides. Oh, chills on the wind again, Eating through our clothes, Aching our blood cells. Oh, where is home again, With fire in our hearts, And love on our shoulders…
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thetworegs said

love it ......

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Oh, it's fall again, Autumn leaves are sweeping in, Came and went like the tides. Oh, chills on the wind again, Eating through our clothes, Aching our blood cells. Oh, where is home again, With fire in our hearts, And love on our shoulders…
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Guest said

Very good.

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Oh, it's fall again, Autumn leaves are sweeping in, Came and went like the tides. Oh, chills on the wind again, Eating through our clothes, Aching our blood cells. Oh, where is home again, With fire in our hearts, And love on our shoulders…
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JR James said

Like how u did the vocals and where they are placed. Nice songwriting.

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Oh, it's fall again, Autumn leaves are sweeping in, Came and went like the tides. Oh, chills on the wind again, Eating through our clothes, Aching our blood cells. Oh, where is home again, With fire in our hearts, And love on our shoulders…
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Andrew Russe said

Love the images you paint with your words.

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I've got a king size bed, in my heart And I'm sinking in, termites eat me apart. And the pillows, under my bones, Feel like stones. Cause I'm sinking in, into spiderwebs, And my head is spinning, so Wake up, wake up, wake up Get outside Stay…
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Andrew Russe said

Awww... you just haven't managed to post one I don't like yet! Love the sound, the vocal delivery. But, woo, the imagery in the lyrics... and this one is just fabulous.

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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Guest said

love it! Keep up the good work buddy, you're doing well already but there's always more to be achieved. -Bekz

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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thetworegs said

Great vocal....sounds like more than guitar and voice ......

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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Guest said

Haunting track - love the driving feel to the guitar, and the sound of your voice very much.

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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Guest said

Good one.

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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JR James said

Good song here. I dig your vocals and the distant vocal. I want the drums and band to kick in and bash away with that guitar riff. I still like the way its presented here. :)

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So come down, and fade away, The lights are still hanging from last holidays. And the place in the dark, we'd occupy, Is leaving my heart, feeling nullified. So slow down, and walk with me, Dark empty lanes, under heavy leafless trees…
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Andrew Russe said

Oooh yeah. Like it.

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So, I'll drink up, beautiful, I'll leave bottles, up and down the coast, When I get to that light house, I'll burn it down, and laugh. Skeletons rise up to meet me, In a place where the waves touch the beach, And hollowed bones, broken…
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Andrew Russe said

Yep, back for another listen. Fabulous, stark, and beautiful.

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So, I'll drink up, beautiful, I'll leave bottles, up and down the coast, When I get to that light house, I'll burn it down, and laugh. Skeletons rise up to meet me, In a place where the waves touch the beach, And hollowed bones, broken…
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Will Stelter said

Hey, thanks for the kind words. Took your suggestion, Andrew, and added a little on the end.

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So, I'll drink up, beautiful, I'll leave bottles, up and down the coast, When I get to that light house, I'll burn it down, and laugh. Skeletons rise up to meet me, In a place where the waves touch the beach, And hollowed bones, broken…
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Nick P said

Great song....

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So, I'll drink up, beautiful, I'll leave bottles, up and down the coast, When I get to that light house, I'll burn it down, and laugh. Skeletons rise up to meet me, In a place where the waves touch the beach, And hollowed bones, broken…
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Guest said

I agree with Andrew.....this is really good

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So, I'll drink up, beautiful, I'll leave bottles, up and down the coast, When I get to that light house, I'll burn it down, and laugh. Skeletons rise up to meet me, In a place where the waves touch the beach, And hollowed bones, broken…
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Andrew Russe said

I think this is so good I can't figure out anything sensible to say. I LOVE this song and how you've recorded it.

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I'd move, way up north, Yeah, I'd row, til I felt on course. I'd leave my roads behind, me, If my veins would let me go. So I'll sleep, on broken pines, Wreak havok on my troubled mind. I'd face the dark to find me, If there was anything still…
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Guest said

Good one.

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And when the smoke had settled to the ground, The color schemes we picked, wanted out When the molds of our skins shattered through, the holds on our funds went too Through the ash, and decay, there's not much left to say, not much left to say…
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thetworegs said

Excellent....

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