a twist in the tale....
My sister Mary calls on me
Very rare she comes around
She tells me she is in love with this guy
Who lives on the other side of town
Wide eyed, loud and gushing
She tells me his name is Danny McCrew
Over coffee…
There's a story behind this that's uninteresting to anyone but me. A short version is that my old, broken guitar (made semi-immortal with duct tape and instrumental willpower) needed to play this Dylan song before it is laid to rest.
One of my favourite songs off Blood On The Tracks and you have covered it so well. Cool expressive vocal and those banjo solos sort of add a poignancy. Good job mate.
Don't tell me the sky is falling
You're gonna break my heart
You look just like a friend I had
But I don't remember you
Come with me
You'll be safe in my arms
I'll hide you away
Your mom won't know
Your dad won't care
Your sister's…
There's a story behind this that's uninteresting to anyone but me. A short version is that my old, broken guitar (made semi-immortal with duct tape and instrumental willpower) needed to play this Dylan song before it is laid to rest.
Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Using my sonic Mustang plugged into the Behringer perfect pitch to drive Brains and to use the midi stream to trigger two Live drum kits. Proof of Concept.
Tear-stained skin weathers resting near as the sun is born
A sacrament to visions of sorrow and seasons of remorse
Butterflies disturb the light with dance
Flowers sway and gently bend
Beckoning with soul the wind
Life brings another chance…
WOW! That is one beautiful song. The lyrics are lovely poetry and the recording nice and clear. I like how you have panned the acoustic guitars and also the laid-back vocal performance. Great work.
my music composition, a strict 12 tone row work for electronic string orchestra.The photo is from “Pexels” :
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Produced by DJ Ade
(Shout out to TAAAPES)
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Lyrics (not edited for grammar, etc…
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Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
On the last day of summer
The day before school
It started in the water
Everything was cool
Until we saw this thing appear
It didn't have a sound
This darkness in the water
Looked like a shroud
First
I thought
“I’m trippin’”
There…
Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Some blues/boogie fun.
Ain’t no fun
It's a well known fact
When you’re with the wrong woman
And caught in the act
Sworn to secrecy
We even made a pact
But didn’t matter
We were caught in the act
Been watched and followed
Traced…
The Woman You Love
She never needs to compromise
Strips paint with a simple cut of her eyes
As warm as a summer sun; as cold as a winter moon
Likes to relax with a book on a rainy afternoon
She lays tables cooks our food
Laughs a deeper…
Engine stalling
Redwood falling
Babies bawling
Sheriff come calling
Another child missing
Black snake hissing
Radio squawking
Searchers walking
Media stalking
Everybody talking
Mother in ruins
What’s black snake doing?
Fox in the…
Recent Comments
Love it as you know
Another beauty
One of my favourite songs off Blood On The Tracks and you have covered it so well. Cool expressive vocal and those banjo solos sort of add a poignancy. Good job mate.
Ooo-cool vocals! Nice 70's feel. A natural feel as well. Great job. :-}
the first thing to hit is the excellent production then the excellent vocals that bass bounces right through you
excellent cover of a classic great vocal
welcome to the other side Pru beautiful acoustic, great vocal, honest lyric excellent production
Cool song and that stripped back accompaniment works well. You have a great timbre in your voice.
Excellent 👌🏻
WOW! That is one beautiful song. The lyrics are lovely poetry and the recording nice and clear. I like how you have panned the acoustic guitars and also the laid-back vocal performance. Great work.
Nice classical style. Once again, nice job :-)
Interesting. Has a haunt to it. Good job.
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Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
Just beautiful. Great lyrics and excellent vocals/instrumentation. Production is first class. Your vocal has a kinda Suzanne Vega vibe which I love.
I feel like I just read somebody's diary.... This feels brutally honest and the vocals and instrumentation are spot on. Very nice!
Nice !!!!!! Loving these lyrics :-). Kickin' ass there bud. :-}
Geez Ray, your vocals do fit your songs. Nice work! Freakin' good, man. :-)
oh yeah, likin' this.... yeah :-)
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