Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
Nice song, new to me. Like the live sound and fretboard squeaks, creates a mood and an atmosphere. Great vocals! The chord syncing sounds tricky, but you've made a very special performance here Tom. Excellent!
Inspired by a large stone I saw in the Ortspark in Munich, which somebody had carefully engraved with the name Mabel.
No loops used this time, all virtual instruments played by me. Cymbal, guitar, acoustic guitar, violin.
Vocals, Vocal Melody: Gerry Finan
Lyrics: Tez Katalaja
Backup Vocals: Kim Noble
Guitars, Bass: Jorge Paulo
Drums: Robert Cudmore
Original Music & Production: Steffen Offermann
Inspired by a large stone I saw in the Ortspark in Munich, which somebody had carefully engraved with the name Mabel.
No loops used this time, all virtual instruments played by me. Cymbal, guitar, acoustic guitar, violin.
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Thanks Proods
OH Yeah!....again. Really tight groove, man.
Thanks fairynuff
Thanks Tom. Happy you are liking it!
Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Haha : )
Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.
This one ended well before I was ready... more of this please! Well done & thanks for sharing. ~Michael
ok you caught me, I was tapping my big toes
Thanks for listening Proods. : )
Great!
Thanks Greg.
Good stuff. That guitar sounds great.
Thank you. You are too kind : )
Great FUN!!!! Well done! So unique, and I listened through twice.
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
Thanks James : )
Cool. Dig the irreverence. Smart ass attitude!
Very kind Radio Roswell!
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Great bluesy song Greg. The rhythm carries you along the trail as if you're really there. Super!
Love this! My head is nodding uncontrollably. So catchy, and brain shredding solo tops it off. Well done!
Loving the originality and production Brett. Very enjoyable!
Nice song, new to me. Like the live sound and fretboard squeaks, creates a mood and an atmosphere. Great vocals! The chord syncing sounds tricky, but you've made a very special performance here Tom. Excellent!
Thanks for your continued support Tom. This was an attempt at a techno sounding tune with enough, but not too many instruments. Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks Brett. I had the idea, and then was a bit nervous about the end result to be honest. Thanks for your kind words
Nice song, Natural and stripped back, it's very well performed Tom.
Thanks Tom. When you finish moving home, or when you finish moving to the beat?
Haha! I would join you, but I'd only fall on my ass!
Thank you my friend : )
Cool. You can perform very well without a bag of tricks Tom, and I think that's proper talent. Excellent!
Very sweet and good tempo Tom.
Live and natural sounds. Great singing with some very high notes in there. Well done!
Very good and easy listening song. Arrangement and production excellent as usual Steffen!
Thanks Radio Roswell. I hope there's a movie producer out there who agrees! : )
Thanks Jason, appreciate it!
Crazy!
I don't know about that, but cheers for the vote!
Thanks Proods. Happy that you like it
Like it. Nice and clear sound and a charming view of the future!