Thanks Proods

OH Yeah!....again. Really tight groove, man.

Thanks fairynuff

Thanks Tom. Happy you are liking it!

Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).

Haha : )

Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.

This one ended well before I was ready... more of this please! Well done & thanks for sharing. ~Michael

ok you caught me, I was tapping my big toes

Thanks for listening Proods. : )

Great!

Thanks Greg.

Good stuff. That guitar sounds great.

Thank you. You are too kind : )

Great FUN!!!! Well done! So unique, and I listened through twice.

Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )

You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!

Thanks James : )

Cool. Dig the irreverence. Smart ass attitude!

Very kind Radio Roswell!

Like train sound, clever intro. Hypnotic sound, quick! Pass me the pipe : )

Love it! Blues/ fleetwood mac sound.

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Great guitar tones. Reminds me a bit of Wishbone Ash. Cool!

Moody and deep, enjoy the guitar tone and your expressive vocals Tom.

Excellent Steffen! Emotional without sounding miserable, as James said.

Lovely! Really well expressed and performed. Good job Colleen and the guys

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

Lovely vocals. Great expression in your voice, this number suits you well, good work Tom!

Nice job Tom. I haven't heard this song before, but I can sense the emotions you convey in the lyrics. The quick chord changes sound tricky. Well done!

Lovely tone, a nice depth created, and great vocals add up to a really good sound here Tom. Like the way you have added an extra dimension with accompanying vocals. Well done!

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Thank you fairynuff!

James, love this! Neil Young sound to it, and great, funny lyrics.

Cool. Like the guitar start. Reminiscent of Bolan to me, rocked up and psychedelic. Very nice Brett, been waiting for more music from you!

This sounds tricky to strum and sing at the same time. I like the rhythm you give it, and vocals are good too. I had a look at Dawes playing it, and I was a bit underwhelmed to be honest. I prefer your version Tom, more direct and effective I reckon. Good job!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Multi layered this time Tom.like the extra guitar coming in. It sounds great. Not easy song to carry off but you have done a very good job. Super!

Atmospheric, great tune, nice singing, well mixed, I really like it. Well done Steffen!