I had a lot of fun listening to this one. The subtle use of sitar and the chugging rhythm guitar are two cool things (of many) that jump out at me. Nice work, Steve! :)
Rocka my brain. Rocka my soul
Rocka my body in a six foot hole
Don't leave me here to face this night alone
Rock me in the evening. Rock me at night
Rock my body in the broad day light
But don't leave me here to face my life alone
You…
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You're always on my mind
Gotta take you with me
Can't leave you behind
Blind to circumstance
If I can get a little more
Gotta take the chance
Flyin' high again
It's do or die
There's no need to pretend
Runnin' from wall to…
GRUMBLE RUMBLE
Remembering Standing Rock
Grumble rumble goes the sky
Spitting water in my eye
Whhhhhhhhhhh goes the wind
Time to call the children in
That's no rumble from the sky
Those are guns with barrels that glow
And the freezing…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
One of my originals :-) Everything that you can hear is just me, apart from the drums. I did quite a few layers of guitar work. I used my electric 6 string Fender guitar for creating a bass type of sound. I also used that one for the solo ( I…
My first take recording of my acoustic cover version of "Love me tender" by Elvis Presley. I played this on my little Höhner guitar with 6 nylon strings. I did a double recording for the guitar. Premier enregistrement de ma reprise acoustique…
Comments on doktordoktor's stuff
the guitar riff really drives this tune and compliments the electronic stuff well
A nice "pick me up" in these uncertain times! The bongos and other percussive sounds are nicely juxtaposed with the simulated jet sounds. Cool stuff!
I'm a feelin' the Ska! Thanks for fun listen. That shuffle bassline is dem sweetest ting, mon.
Cool music. Electro Reggae.Sounds great has a happy feel to this music.....
Great Ska feel :) I esp. like the bassline
I like shuffles so I hit the play button :-) cool sounds! enjoyed! KC
I like how this evolves a cool piece! KC
Thanks for your kind comments pharmakeus!
Love the big synths :) great beat I like the guitar work
Awesome track :) Spooky synths and cool beat
Very cool :)
Thanks castrati brothers : )
Nicely put together
I had a lot of fun listening to this one. The subtle use of sitar and the chugging rhythm guitar are two cool things (of many) that jump out at me. Nice work, Steve! :)
Yes, better that than the other way around! Thanks for listening Fudgetusk
Thanks Tom. I have another almost done, and also one you might want to work with. : )
Love this one; it’s great seeing you back on alonetone! :)
I’m happy that you enjoyed it Psychic Sperm. : )
Glad you liked it Jason!
Thank you Fudgetusk
Comments made by doktordoktor
Great lyric, performed with emotion. Nice job!
Good effort! This isn't an easy song, but the tone of it sounds just right.
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
Like this. Great stuff!
Nice guitar work Colin!
Like this version. Catchy song!
Nice cover Tom : )
Like this. Lyrics, melody, effects, rhythm. Good job!
Thanks James : )
Nice tune Steffen : )
Very kind Radio Roswell!
Thanks Anna/Memphis : )
This is really good. I like the lyrics, vocals, production, style, everything!
Great song. You put a lot of emotion into your songs
Glad you like it MemphisMaiden. Thanks.
You have a lovely voice Anna. Very good!
Nice song. You've managed to do your own backing vocals too. Good job!
From Pulp Fiction too? Powerful song, comes across well Tom. Well done!
Thanks Tom, Nick P and Lux Lucis.
A fresh sounding Rock and Roll song. Great!