Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

Thanks Brett

very cool.

Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

Thanks fairynuff : )

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

nice..

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

I hear you, brother.

Thank you fairynuff!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Great lyric, performed with emotion. Nice job!

Good effort! This isn't an easy song, but the tone of it sounds just right.

Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )

Like this. Great stuff!

Nice guitar work Colin!

Like this version. Catchy song!

Nice cover Tom : )

Like this. Lyrics, melody, effects, rhythm. Good job!

Thanks James : )

Nice tune Steffen : )

Very kind Radio Roswell!

Thanks Anna/Memphis : )

This is really good. I like the lyrics, vocals, production, style, everything!

Great song. You put a lot of emotion into your songs

Glad you like it MemphisMaiden. Thanks.

You have a lovely voice Anna. Very good!

Nice song. You've managed to do your own backing vocals too. Good job!

From Pulp Fiction too? Powerful song, comes across well Tom. Well done!

Thanks Tom, Nick P and Lux Lucis.

A fresh sounding Rock and Roll song. Great!