Love the lyrics. Half expecting to hear a sound sample of a beer opening a few times in the song ,lol

Thanks Brett

very cool.

Thank you Tom and AMUC. They are professional loops, except for the two synths which I played at the beginning and repeated. The timing takes care of itself once you have set the speed up. It's choosing what to use, how to arrange it and make it sound interesting is the fun and challenge of it for me. I'm grateful for your feedback.

I've been pondering which part of this song to single out as my favorite, but what I think like more than anything is how well it all combines to be more than the sum of its parts. Great job, Steve!

I like the crunchy drums here. This sounds very professionally mastered - all the instruments jump right out at you in the mix.

Thanks for your lyrics and vocal performance Tom. Kind of brought it to life!

Thanks fairynuff : )

Thanks again for offering the opportunity to collab on this song with you, Steve!

Lyrics by Tom Browning Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screens so blind Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it. Down, in the suit that we wear, It's in the suit that we share. Can't you seek us out and then find, find, find That we ain't got nothing to hide, hide, hide Through, the dirt, Spring pinches it's deadly grip An, acid rain, ungroomed smell of it Slight, crooked teeth, I hear behind the screen. Our, fingertips, burnt tyres and lips next to it.

Thanks Tom. I will eventually come up with some words to fit and suit this.

Fun stuff, Steve! This one really has an inspiring edge to it, kinda like a "We Will Rock You" by Queen.

nice..

Thank you kindly. As long as people like you appreciate and enjoy it, I will keep trying to entertain!

This is astonishingly good! I think you are being too humble in saying you *just* patch a few sounds together.

Thanks Tom. You are too kind. I only patched a few sounds together :)

Flawless -- you're really starting to hit your groove with songwriting, Steve!

I hear you, brother.

Thank you fairynuff!

Thanks Tom, I appreciate your comments. Mixing and cutting loops to make a tune is easier for me than singing. I think I need more help than a bit of echo. Talking Heads were fun and wacky, a bit different, so I'm happy if I remind you of them.

Simple yet effective, but you probably knew I'd say that ; )

Nice upbeat tune. Like it!

Evocative lyrics, lovely song. You and Tom Browning both perform so effectively and simply, and get your words across with just a guitar as accompaniment. I think it's proper talent. Many of us are not so naturally gifted, and rely on a battery of electronic effects. Inspiring!

Couldn't make out the lyrics, sorry. Wanted to hear about the butts, but you sounded kind of angry

Original music

Short and sweet (haha)

Like the choppy riffs.

Punchy and fresh! Good job guys

Nice keyboards. Cool tune!

Very well expressed sentiments Tom. I like it.

Love the laid back groove

Imaginative mix of sounds. Like it!

So calm Ed. I like it

Dreamy and peaceful. Lovely!

Nice version. Simple and pure

Nice song, beautifully performed

Thanks Colleen : )

Thanks Greg. i will try to be original and not too predictable with the music!

Lovely song. Nice job Greg!

Very 60's vibe to this. Great stuff!