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This is the first song I ever wrote that I was proud of. and I haven't matched it since. I had the first line in my head for like a year, then I switched it round and had the second line. With that, I sat down at my guitar and played the first…
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yelyah said

"and I haven't matched it since" I've had that feeling before. And there's only one fix for it. Write more material. So keep going. :)

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This song is about someone giving you a lift, and while they drive you there you fall in love with them by watching their eyes in the rear view mirror. It had like five verses but I cUt it down to two with one repeated. In cutting those verses…
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yelyah said

I won't claim to know anything about expiring free trials. :) You might give Reaper a try. I haven't used it, but I've heard good things over the years. And it's the "full, uncrippled, unexpiring evaluation version". http://www.reaper.fm/

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This song is about someone giving you a lift, and while they drive you there you fall in love with them by watching their eyes in the rear view mirror. It had like five verses but I cUt it down to two with one repeated. In cutting those verses…
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Guest said

Cool lazy vocal.

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This song is about someone giving you a lift, and while they drive you there you fall in love with them by watching their eyes in the rear view mirror. It had like five verses but I cUt it down to two with one repeated. In cutting those verses…
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Guest said

Love the concept and the lyrics.

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This song is about my current state of seemingly perpetual virginity. But more than that, it's my sorta twee manifesto, for now any way. I really like black tambourine, tintin, kittens, big wolf on campus, poetry and that's what it's about. I…
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Folly said

hey man i got new music up by the way

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This is a song I wrote one night before I fell asleep. It's about a girl I know but I changed her name to maya in the song after reading it in 1950s sewing patterns. I had to tell her she wasn't a little girl any more. then there's a cover of…
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Folly said

Why hello there mr jones

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This is the first song I ever wrote that I was proud of. and I haven't matched it since. I had the first line in my head for like a year, then I switched it round and had the second line. With that, I sat down at my guitar and played the first…
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Guest said

I think you are right, I like this one the best too.

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This song is about my current state of seemingly perpetual virginity. But more than that, it's my sorta twee manifesto, for now any way. I really like black tambourine, tintin, kittens, big wolf on campus, poetry and that's what it's about. I…
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Guest said

Seems to me you are having fun down there. Welcome to Alonetone.

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