Heavy, head-bobbin' groovy-trippy bliss.

No suggestions. Because - I find the "roughness" of it (your word, not mine) artful and exciting. The sounds are great - here, in "dine inside my mind", and in "star" - the guitar sounds in particular catch my ear; something in the way you balance them against the very delicate vocals ... it really works on me. I just love your music.

I think this sounds great as it is, too. But you are the boss!

really awesome track. thoroughly enjoyed the vocal part.

nice pop song! your vocals are unique. and well recorded. i would turn the gain up on those tinkly bell sounds.

hey there ghost, We use Audacity, the free editor. we self sample, room sample, and spend a lot of time experimenting. Sounds like you do similar methods, with radically different results. evidence that our music really do say things about ourselves. Your stuff is still experimental yet has more listenability, (it's better technically) in fact it's really good.

whoa apprently something happened here...mono re-uploading...

I kind of like it as it is. It's breezy and laid back.

This is new. I'm guessing the vocals is your recording? Seems very interesting. I don't know what else you should add really. I can kind of tell you were trying to avoid a melodic experience so... maybe add some guitar licks that kind of hits the end notes to finish it all off on later vocalization. For randomness and uniqueness.

It is sounding good so far mate very cool.