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VERSE I I don’t want to wait, till the end, to have you And I know you’re the one, fill me up, when I’m through Cause you completely satisfied me even before I’m done And you’ll be right beside me even when I run And I know it’s my fault…
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wilsun said

Very anthemic, awesome closer.

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VERSE I I come from the cold I need you to knead me Stretch me, I take form Need you to complete me Pr CH Cause you, you make Me all I am and all that I should be Chorus With all that you are craving for I don't know where I fit…
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wilsun said

Great vocals on this one.

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VERSE I We have some decisions to make On how to sustain our lives tonight I have a feeling you already know I have some catching up to do We’ve had better thoughts Than this bottom shelf idea tonight The iron is ready go Let’s get this…
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wilsun said

Love the drums and guitar sounds on this.

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VERSE I Lettuce in first To build a foundation Everything else is up to you It these choices that you make, pour it on that create the moment you have waited for PRE CH These tines, plunging in CHORUS And we are all so intricate…
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wilsun said

Darn, that chorus is catchy as heck.

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VERSE I Lettuce in first To build a foundation Everything else is up to you It these choices that you make, pour it on that create the moment you have waited for PRE CH These tines, plunging in CHORUS And we are all so intricate…
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angie fights crime said

you should add lyrics to your works. i love this btw.

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