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Gary Thompson from the Music by Computer yahoo list (aka Johnny Pumphandle) remixed me version 2 of Sweeny's Agony - and blew me away - by toning down the volume he brought out a lot more soul in my opinion. I love it - and I hope you do too. Chris
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Guest said

Very strong vocal drive. this is totally awesome! I often say that about all your music. Keep em coming and burning!

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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Reefwalker said

love the narration, and the echo FX's of the tea in the garden bit. And harp too? excellent.

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for ImprovFriday PES'd guitar improv - and softsynths ARP2600, Albino, Hellix, Absynth, Cameleon5000 in Sonar 8.5
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kirklynch said

Impressive piece of work! Enjoyed that!

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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Movement To Contact said

Nice work Chris and Emily!, so many great additions to the killer beat i am getting lost!

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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Rick Phillips said

EXCELLENT Chris and Emily! Honored to be part of this collaboration.

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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kavin. said

Really love how this has developed!

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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thetworegs said

Emilys voice is quite haunting in play with Ricks Guitar and Chris's Bass and the percussion goes with out saying is excellent. Good one

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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Norm said

Beautiful job, Emily! I love it!

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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kirklynch said

Nice additions. Very cool!

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Percussion = Norm Guitar = Rick Vox = Emily Bass = Chris We started with this http://alonetone.com/rickph/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow-normrick which came from this http://alonetone.com/norm/tracks/a-mile-with-sorrow I hope you both…
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Guest said

Like the soothing vocals, percussion by norm?,,,wow this good!

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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Guest said

Cool song and istrumentation

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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igor said

Sketch of the ripple of unseen muscles. Tea for two who wish to take their tea in the garden. Concentrating of attention with careful subtlety to this end. I like that.

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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Rick Phillips said

WOW! Great sound and meaty lyrics, maestros!

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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richardlaceves said

very cool guys,,,,has a primal feel,,,,,,enjoyed very much

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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kavin. said

nice spoken word piece and the music provides the perfect backdrop.

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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thetworegs said

Great percussion as well arrryyehh yeehh yaaah

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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thetworegs said

Enjoyed this immensely in fact so much so i started to laugh

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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Norm said

Ha! Very clever! I love the bass lick and vox... and I'm very proud to be a part of your first accoustic recording of cornet, flute and harmonica. Historic indeed. And what an interesting poem. I read up on it. Some highlights: With "Hysteria" Eliot created an unconventional poetic diction by using verse rhythms that were based on the cadences of speech rather than poetic structure. It is possible that the laughter may be a product of the woman’s ‘hysteria’, but it is more likely that the title applies to the narrator’s reaction to that laughter. “As she laughed,” he begins, “I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it.” He begins to feel as though he has physically become the laughter he is observing." "The narrator’s goal is to collect pieces of the details he was able to capture in order to rebuild a coherent reality. The reader is left somewhat skeptical of this goal, however, because of the narrator’s doubtful language. “If” the woman’s breasts “could” be stopped, “some” fragments “might” be collected. Each line contains two distinct words of uncertainty, and by the end we are not sure that the narrator’s hysteria can be cured.

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HYSTERIA poem by: T.S. Eliot (1888-1965) As she laughed I was aware of becoming involved in her laughter and being part of it, until her teeth were only accidental stars with a talent for squad-drill. I was drawn in by short gasps…
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Movement To Contact said

Kick ass collab gents. Fine work chris and norm! FAV'D Love the additions to the track! The horns work great.

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As can happen when you listen to sometime a million times over your mind and ears start accepting things that later you wish you had not. This is a (much better imho) revision thanks to the urging of Gary from the music by computer list.
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Guest said

What a vocal. Go for it Chris!

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