There's a story behind this that's uninteresting to anyone but me. A short version is that my old, broken guitar (made semi-immortal with duct tape and instrumental willpower) needed to play this Dylan song before it is laid to rest.
Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Using my sonic Mustang plugged into the Behringer perfect pitch to drive Brains and to use the midi stream to trigger two Live drum kits. Proof of Concept.
Tear-stained skin weathers resting near as the sun is born
A sacrament to visions of sorrow and seasons of remorse
Butterflies disturb the light with dance
Flowers sway and gently bend
Beckoning with soul the wind
Life brings another chance…
WOW! That is one beautiful song. The lyrics are lovely poetry and the recording nice and clear. I like how you have panned the acoustic guitars and also the laid-back vocal performance. Great work.
my music composition, a strict 12 tone row work for electronic string orchestra.The photo is from “Pexels” :
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Produced by DJ Ade
(Shout out to TAAAPES)
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Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
On the last day of summer
The day before school
It started in the water
Everything was cool
Until we saw this thing appear
It didn't have a sound
This darkness in the water
Looked like a shroud
First
I thought
“I’m trippin’”
There…
Mr. Greene
The most beautiful man I’d ever seen
Our high school teacher Mr. Greene
Little more than a child at seventeen
In love with our teacher Mr. Greene
Immature and so out of touch
Just a silly schoolgirl crush.
Dreamy kid; Duran…
Some blues/boogie fun.
Ain’t no fun
It's a well known fact
When you’re with the wrong woman
And caught in the act
Sworn to secrecy
We even made a pact
But didn’t matter
We were caught in the act
Been watched and followed
Traced…
The Woman You Love
She never needs to compromise
Strips paint with a simple cut of her eyes
As warm as a summer sun; as cold as a winter moon
Likes to relax with a book on a rainy afternoon
She lays tables cooks our food
Laughs a deeper…
Engine stalling
Redwood falling
Babies bawling
Sheriff come calling
Another child missing
Black snake hissing
Radio squawking
Searchers walking
Media stalking
Everybody talking
Mother in ruins
What’s black snake doing?
Fox in the…
every moment
each day
searching
for something
someone
to feel
know
care
every face
each friend
rejection
and its too much
too much
too much
to bear
it's been a long
long
time coming
it's a long
long
way home
every moment
each inch of time…
wrote this song about 6 yrs ago , mix and mastered , guitars , keyboard , bass guitar , vocals and backing vocals , lead guitar , mandolin , and song written by myself , hope you like it thanks for your time ,.....cheers tony cee
How long did you think you could run for?
How long did you think you could hide?
I used to catch you in your sleep
And I'd sneak a peak at your dreams
And I watched you so close
From the back row
And I was always so slow
When I had you…
On the last day of summer
The day before school
It started in the water
Everything was cool
Until we saw this thing appear
It didn't have a sound
This darkness in the water
Looked like a shroud
First
I thought
“I’m trippin’”
There…
Recent Comments
excellent cover of a classic great vocal
welcome to the other side Pru beautiful acoustic, great vocal, honest lyric excellent production
Cool song and that stripped back accompaniment works well. You have a great timbre in your voice.
Excellent 👌🏻
WOW! That is one beautiful song. The lyrics are lovely poetry and the recording nice and clear. I like how you have panned the acoustic guitars and also the laid-back vocal performance. Great work.
Nice classical style. Once again, nice job :-)
Interesting. Has a haunt to it. Good job.
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Pru, Cool to have you aboard. Nice song you have. Nice voice, and your uncle did a great job producing this. Please, any chance you get do share your songs. Keep up the great work. :-}
Just beautiful. Great lyrics and excellent vocals/instrumentation. Production is first class. Your vocal has a kinda Suzanne Vega vibe which I love.
I feel like I just read somebody's diary.... This feels brutally honest and the vocals and instrumentation are spot on. Very nice!
Nice !!!!!! Loving these lyrics :-). Kickin' ass there bud. :-}
Geez Ray, your vocals do fit your songs. Nice work! Freakin' good, man. :-)
oh yeah, likin' this.... yeah :-)
Gbedu we dey burst brain
I have an addiction in this song
Wow, great love song!
Very nice song, I like it.
fantastic .......cheers tony cee
wow great song .again brill mix fantastic listen,.......cheers tony cee