Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
My light-hearted take on a serious issue.
Over- prescription of powerful and addictive drugs, and the unknown and (to some) worrying relationship between doctors and the drug companies.
Disclaimer: Dr. Kreviss is a fictional character, and any…
Just got my system up again after several hardware upgrade conflicts, and a move to California.
Been thinking about changing this songs ending for a while, finally getting around to it. Good to post here again!
Cheers,
Reef
Interesting cover. I was thinking of doing a Chili Peppers style number. This is good, just you and the guitar. It sounds really cool. Not an easy song. Well done Tom!
Track 04, "Right One"
funk, ego tripping, cop, porno music
"I can tell by the smell of your stench you've been out all day/I can tell by the smell of your hair, your the right child ..."
When I was in college my room mate told me a STORY about a traveler who arrived at the gates of a city in a strange land. Seeing a beggar at the gate he gave him a coin and asked him a question: "What kind of people will I find in your city…
Been busy revising....but hey!! i passed.....
JUST LIKE THE 70’S
Everybody knows that the 70‘s rocked man
That rock stars where made of gold
Everybody knows everyone was plugged in
the music played with everyones soul
Everyone knows everything…
Comments on doktordoktor's stuff
Thanks Proods
OH Yeah!....again. Really tight groove, man.
Thanks fairynuff
Thanks Tom. Happy you are liking it!
Love it! You're getting better and better with every song. The charging riff you have here reminds me a bit of the last few minutes of the song "Buckethead's TV Show" by Buckethead. (The downside to listening to as much music as I do is that everything reminds me of something else, haha).
Haha : )
Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.
This one ended well before I was ready... more of this please! Well done & thanks for sharing. ~Michael
ok you caught me, I was tapping my big toes
Thanks for listening Proods. : )
Great!
Thanks Greg.
Good stuff. That guitar sounds great.
Thank you. You are too kind : )
Great FUN!!!! Well done! So unique, and I listened through twice.
Thanks Tom. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased that you listen so closely. I'm conscious that I don't have much of a voice, and I'm not very confident about singing. There is not much power or range there, and I've noticed that I'm kind of deeper and hoarser since being on some medicine this last few weeks. I wrote this lyric about a year ago, and I've been trying to fit a tune to it. Overall I guess I'm fairly happy with how it turned out. I want my efforts to have a style that mixes different elements and don't sound too predictable or boring. Getting my lyrics to fit is my second biggest problem. - Ideally I'd like to find someone to sing for me! Thanks again : )
You quite skillfully merge different kinds of styles in this song. If I might offer a suggestion: it would have been nice if your vocals were a little higher in the mix near the beginning of the song -- I was trying to catch the lyrics but they were obscured by the music. Other than that one very minor critique, this is one of your strongest songs, Steve!
Thanks James : )
Cool. Dig the irreverence. Smart ass attitude!
Very kind Radio Roswell!
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Like the melody here Tom. Nice job!
Thank you fairynuff : )
Cool and different. Good stuff!
Great song! Love it!
Interesting cover. I was thinking of doing a Chili Peppers style number. This is good, just you and the guitar. It sounds really cool. Not an easy song. Well done Tom!
Thanks fairynuff
Nice and flowing. Good job!
Cool!
Haha : )
Thanks Michael. I'm always thinking that I shouldn't make long songs in case listeners get bored and switch off.
Great melody, love the story and you perform it so well!
Robotic Irish music. Great!
Like it!
Nice tune. Good arrangement.
Thanks for listening Proods. : )
Sorry, that was me commenting on your tracks. I forgot to sign in!
Thanks Greg.
Creepy and funny. Retro feel to it. Love the vocals and guitar.
Great stuff! Rocking! Who doesn't love the 70s? : )
Thank you. You are too kind : )