Cool .....another Great Tune!!!

Excellent song! It's got kind of a Kate Bush feel. :)

Beautiful slow build. After hearing this, and recently breaking out my old Roland beat box, I feel a sudden need to get an old analog synth. :P

That synth is so lonely and the vocal accompanying is a perfect fit

Big sound, you still have the touch. I wonder what you are doing the other 11 months of the year (more a statement than a question). I hope you are writing, performing or something associated with music. I always enjoy hearing what you produce.

We like ... (Mrs R listening too) ... This, like Almost Felt Like Dancing earlier, throws me right back into being the "university student me" in the early 80s - I can almost taste it. Very cool track.

Yeah.... like it... takes me back to the 80s!

nice listen , love the drums . ......cheers tony cee.

I really like this. It reminds me of the early industrial stuff, bits of Skinny Puppy? The vocal work gives it a completely different feel, but the bass and drums pound.

Never get tired of this style. So good.

Interesting texture to this.

You still got the touch! Nice song.

Oh yes indeed. Love this.

Wonderful song! So moving and beautiful words

love it! very moving.

Missed this one! Nice :)

Eerily delivered and sadly very right to the point…. Great job! Your voice is so beautiful.

You're voice is incredible, but oh man are you're arrangements something special. They are so sparse, but just have such momentum. If you stopped posting your RPM tracks, my FAWM's would be a little worse.

I love that "I don’t think that this Jar is enough" line, and how you sing the "You Maybe mine for a while". Cool harmonies as well.

Oh yeah, like it.

omg....this really appeals to me. Gives me that Velvet Underground - Lou Reed feel. Super cool. I actually looked up 880 skyline lol. I used to live right beside a highway and a busy train track. I love what's going on at 4:42 btw

Awesome! Lyrics are great...and very catchy and love the harmonica. Well done. Love the chorus hook...original too.

Nicely done! I really like this electronic style....sounds amazing. Good to listen to as we descend :) Your FAWM is obviously going well!

seriously - that is an amazing catchy chorus - total hook!

Great lyrics!!! (I relate). I love that chorus (you will feel like you!)- nice harmony work. Cool guitar riff. Nicely done.

ha! I love this- wild, funky and great lyrics!!!

oh yeah! That's an awesome song - that challenge is bringing out some great creativity. I love the chord changes - some unexpected ones in there!

Anther great tune!

Yeah! That's a cool tune. Very rocky and catchy. I also really like the ending scratchy amp sounds...love that effect.

Oh yeah!!! I love that beginning/ending!! Beautiful song, great vocals and guitar, cool lyrics. I must say the recording/production is also well done. I'll go have a whiskey (wait...it's only 4:25 pm...and I should be working!).

wow!!!! I LOVE this. Great vibe and pensive and beautiful. Cool challenge there too.

Awesome! Very catchy melodically (complex in a great way) and otherwise. I love the bridge....and the "they don't count anymore"...love that....and nice ending vocal too. Your challenge seems to be going extremely well.

Great tune and title! Love the way the guitar comes in and then builds on itself; and the riff is very catchy too. Well done! oh yeah, cool...now I'm hearing that bass toward the end....wow. RPM is going well I see.

Beautiful! Great idea for a song. What a lovely melody. ps. thanks for your support. Glad I found your music too; it's all so gorgeous. Listening to the next one as I write this. :)

Great piece. I love the feeling of this...moody and complex. Seriously cool. RPM brings out some of the best stuff.

oh yeah! I love this. Wild. haha..."cute" is not the adjective that came to my mind though. Great topic for a song too. The vocal effects are great.

oh yeah! this is a great song. I love the vocals and great lyrics :). Beautiful melody on this too. well done. Was this last years RPM?

What a fun song! Great vibe too. Love the harmonica or melodica maybe. May your RPM month continue smoothly - off to a great start.

Love it - also the era it is from! I hear the Bron-Y-Aur Stomp but only because you mention it (that is one of my favourite Zeppelin songs). Fun and great musicianship truly.

Ah! I now read your post....that challenge seems more zen :). I also like that emphasis on the song writing part. You're off to a fabulous start! PS thanks for listening to my stuff - much appreciated. ONWARD WE GO! lol