I agree it's a bit shrill in places. This track is actually one of the few times I've thought I shouldn't just publish but should polish. I often struggle with this feeling and - as with this track - lose.

Lovely melodic fragments, overlapping beautifully. It does sound a little shrill in places, which is forcing me to listen very quietly. Intriguing! As MMI said, more please!!!!!!!

i like it... it somehow makes me feel like there's something more discontent than i am right now... Cool stuff, and I love the fact that you detailed your voyage in making it as well

Thanks for the positive thoughts. I'm getting some odd distortions on playing here this morning that I didn't notice in the original (esp. since this piece doesn't play "hot"). They're not supposed to be there. Odd.

...in a direction; I too... (~_~)

deep sounds man.

Dude! Dude! More!

You have no idea how much I like this song right now

Very cool, I dig short tracks like this. They leave a lot to you imagination.

Atmospheric! Made me nostalgic for some old Tangerine Dream albums. (That's a good thing.)

Really cool (now that I'm at home and not wondering if my ipad speakers were broken :)

I like the nice little tinkly rhythm throughout. It is a tad long perhaps, unless you did add something else, you could view it as a very pretty piece of work in progress.

Ooops..had that one cranked up. BOOM!!! Great sounds.

I think it's too long, not enough variation, and needs at least some filtering. Might try a cello next time, or maybe a harmonica.

The sounds of V-Ger! Excellent drone instrument.

@Bethan: thanks... something like "Passing of the comet" would have been a much better title :)

I saw a comet! Then watched it go past!

Great sounds very cool mix

@matt Poetry, Yeah. This is often the case. My comment: I'm just showing how the tragedy and heroism of some people is suddenly not so that there is, and even ... vice versa, sometimes. "I am a mirror," as sung by Leo Sayer in one of the Alan Parsons Project song. Although ... Okay, a distraction. ~Every face is someone else~

@igor: it's often the way with poetry, no? But you offer an interesting historical footnote :) But, in a sense, the poem is a distraction.

Bravo! Bravo!

I think it's too long, not enough variation, and needs at least some filtering. Might try a cello next time, or maybe a harmonica.

@Bethan: thanks... something like "Passing of the comet" would have been a much better title :)

@igor: it's often the way with poetry, no? But you offer an interesting historical footnote :) But, in a sense, the poem is a distraction.

Really nice Bruce. I do wish I could figure out improvFriday. Every time I think about it I go to the site and have no clue what to do next or how people upload or even if they are welcome to. It's all so baffling.

Like I said for the demo, really strong track with a great sound & vocal. I like this one very much.

@igor: words fail me :) @sister: thank you :)

@Bethan: thanks... my imagery was of drifting far out on the edge of the solar system. A very similar feel... down in the inky depths.

Like your sound and the vocal, good track.

That's pretty cool. Wasn't sure what to expect, but I like it.

That was quite a trip!

Cool track.

Loved this as soon as I heard it. You've really nailed the crunchy yet spacey guitar texture and I think the two blend well together. Greater than the sum of it's parts!

Really cool. Geas is right, but you gotta play the UK!!

@wg: My plan to have Professor Plum take the fall has come to naught I see :)

@bethan: thanks, that's an evocative image, i like it.

@Johnny: thanks, i think it shows some promise :)

Grungy and great!

@Sis: Have to be careful of things swooping on you strangely :)

Even your rehearsals are ACE! :)